Chapter 7!

[sweet_death27]

Title: A Desire for Innocence
Author: Me, Melody
Fandom: Good Charlotte
Pairing: Benji centric, with some Benji/Joel and Benji/OMC
Rating: AU, NC-17
Summary: I loved their innocence and naivety; that's what was considered sensual to me. They didn't emanate sensuality and that was exactly why I adored them. Their lubricious nature was hidden

Comments

[aurra_sing]

OMG Perfect chapter!!!

[blacknovember13]

Ok honestly, this was like the hottest chapter ever my favorite chappy so far. But seriously, the images were incredible as usual. I could just picture Benji getting all horny and disappointed at the same time from watching Morgan.

With his confirmation, the ink was soon painting his skin like a body make-up. Temporary tattoos. --> Uh oh, I think I know what's going on.

Looking in the mirror, our faces floated around the room. Identical. --> Mmm. I would give my right arm to fucking see this.

Joel would never have his name cascading from Matthew's lips. He only knew one twin. In his mind. --> I fucking knew it! The clever little bastards! (well, I guess technically you're the clever little bastard, so Bravo! )

"Good morning." I sat down next to him, smiling as I tried to interpret the scribbled calligraphy written in his features. --> O.o I absolutely love this line/image. The metaphor is just, impossibly perfect.

Jealousy pierced me. Desperation spanked me. Shock burned me. It was real. I couldn't believe it

[blacknovember13]

Aww, no probs. The chappy kicked ass anyways. :)

Haha, don't worry. It'll be on its way soon enough.

[blacknovember13]

Ok seriously, I had to read that again because there was so much stuff I missed the first time I read it.

I didn't know Joel and Benji had sex in the beginning! It didn't even occur to me, I just assumed it was another memory. I also didn't happen to figure out that Dorian fucking kissed Benji in the classroom! Dammit, I was too caught up with Morgan's little scenario to realize that that's what it was. Bah.

My clever little one, you have amazed me again. :)

[like_a_movie]

wow. i just love your writing style. (i think i say this every time. lol) i like how you're feeding us just a little more information in each chapter, making the pieces of the backstory come together slowly. beautiful.

[densemind]

*jaw drops*

Okay, so that was not expected.

His lips didn't taste like alcohol, they tasted like fun and ice-cream.

I liked that line a lot.

[thestreetlights]

Wow. That was great! Hmm... yeah. I'm guessing Morgan's a little slut, eh? Great chapter. I'm looking forward to more soon!