Chapter 7!

[sweet_death27]

Title: A Desire for Innocence
Author: Me, Melody
Fandom: Good Charlotte
Pairing: Benji centric, with some Benji/Joel and Benji/OMC
Rating: AU, NC-17
Summary: I loved their innocence and naivety; that's what was considered sensual to me. They didn't emanate sensuality and that was exactly why I adored them. Their lubricious nature was hidden

Comments

[blacknovember13]

Ok honestly, this was like the hottest chapter ever my favorite chappy so far. But seriously, the images were incredible as usual. I could just picture Benji getting all horny and disappointed at the same time from watching Morgan.

With his confirmation, the ink was soon painting his skin like a body make-up. Temporary tattoos. --> Uh oh, I think I know what's going on.

Looking in the mirror, our faces floated around the room. Identical. --> Mmm. I would give my right arm to fucking see this.

Joel would never have his name cascading from Matthew's lips. He only knew one twin. In his mind. --> I fucking knew it! The clever little bastards! (well, I guess technically you're the clever little bastard, so Bravo! )

"Good morning." I sat down next to him, smiling as I tried to interpret the scribbled calligraphy written in his features. --> O.o I absolutely love this line/image. The metaphor is just, impossibly perfect.

Jealousy pierced me. Desperation spanked me. Shock burned me. It was real. I couldn't believe it. I didn't want to accept it. --> Awww, he's like a jealous little school girl. And damn! Morgan is a slut! lol! :D

I was left with Joel in my body, Morgan in my head and Dorian in my lips. --> What an awesome way to sum this up. Seriously, it's a perfect last line.

Ugh, I'm left as a huge pile of mush! But that first line that I quoted about the tattoos was really great. I love how you give just enough info for us to infer what's gonna happen, and then Boom! it happens. Because with the info from the last chappy and then that line, it all just clicks. Anyways, awesome chappy. I think you already know how much I fucking loved it, so I hope it doesn't take as long for the next chappy to come! *shakes finger*

[blacknovember13]

Aww, no probs. The chappy kicked ass anyways. :)

Haha, don't worry. It'll be on its way soon enough.

[blacknovember13]

Ok seriously, I had to read that again because there was so much stuff I missed the first time I read it.

I didn't know Joel and Benji had sex in the beginning! It didn't even occur to me, I just assumed it was another memory. I also didn't happen to figure out that Dorian fucking kissed Benji in the classroom! Dammit, I was too caught up with Morgan's little scenario to realize that that's what it was. Bah.

My clever little one, you have amazed me again. :)