Comments | swamp_ariadne: Own Your Pleasure

swamp_ariadne

Own Your Pleasure - Fanfic, Rated R

Sep 25, 2010 03:16

Title: Own Your Pleasure
Rating: R / MA
Pairing: Dom/Ariadne

Author swamp_ariadne

Response to Prompt: community.livejournal.com/inception_kink/756.html and thursdays_girl request. Submitted to D/A Smut week, though it is double the word count limit. Oh well, double the fun (I hope). concrit welcome.
Warnings: Sexually explicit content.

( Cobb talks Ariadne through... )

pairing: cobb/ariadne, character: dom, cobb, dom_ariadne, smut, character: ariadne

Comments 16

kitoky October 4 2010, 04:04:26 UTC

Oh god, this is great stuff. Phone sex, do want.

But the real thing is better. ;D

vampy_wolfy October 6 2010, 03:11:17 UTC

I really liked the phone sex idea, but it was even better when Cobb showed up! I'm sorry your husband left you for Corpse Bride. I would do a kink prompt, but I don't think I could write good smut. I even know which one I would pick. Oh well, I can't wait to read ore of your writings!

good smut swamp_ariadne October 6 2010, 14:13:02 UTC

thanks so much for the comment :) i didn't know i could write smut either till i tried, so go ahead. which kink/prompt were you thinking of? if it is any one of the word prompts on the D/A Smut Week Call, then just let me know.

Re: good smut vampy_wolfy October 6 2010, 22:31:17 UTC

Thanks! That was actually very helpful, you gave me hope that it could actually turn out decent! The prompt I was thinking of was "There aren't fariytale endings for people like us," at least I think that was how it was worded. That was one of that instantly popped into my head as soon as I as it, but it would probably be a bit longer, cause there is a bit of a plot to it.

Re: good smut vampy_wolfy October 6 2010, 22:44:49 UTC

Okay, I just realized what I said sounded bad. I meant that your stories are really good, and that I hope mine don't turn out really bad.Okay, sorry about that!

moonlight1314 November 8 2010, 08:01:55 UTC

(^///^) Boy-oh-boy. I told you I loved the full stories! ;D And gott sei dank that I came to read this. It was muy calente! The phone sex had me chuckling at the beginning but then the chuckling stopped and the blush began. Oh please don't give up on smut! I'd love to see what else you have in that brain of your's! I'll have to get on reading the rest of your writing tomorrow (its a bit late here now...) >3< Thanks for the great story! :D Please keep up the awesome work!

swamp_ariadne November 8 2010, 09:05:54 UTC

thanks. the whole point of good smut i think is to make the reader... hot... and bothered. if a piece was supposed to be fade to black, then it would be labeled fade to black. you know what i mean? it took a lot of back story development in my head to get these characters to the point they can get happy, simply because i still believe that this is a pairing made to angst.