Knee Deep for totallysoftcore

[heathers]

Title: Knee Deep
Recipient: totallysoftcore
Author: heathers (heathers [at] livejournal [dot] com)
Website: [between.bellvue.&.rikers]
Character/Pairing: Olivia/Alex
Warnings/Spoilers: Season nonspecific.
Summary: "After months of falling in and out of bed with Alex she was back again ... Last call was always good to us that way."
Author's Note: Thanks to lonejaguar for the title

Comments

[heathers]

I am always grateful to hear your feedback. You are like my #1 fan, dude. That's the coolest thing ever for someone as insecure as I am about my writing.

So thanks. No matter what you say it or how you say it you always makes me smile because I know you've read it and that's what matters most. (Though praise is highly addictive, too!)

-H

[speshulduck]

I think I spontaneously combusted while reading this brilliant piece of writing. I'm half-tempted to go buy a betta fish and name it 'Sparky.' Oh who am I kidding? I'd name it 'Olivia.'

In any case, utterly amazing fic :)

[heathers]

I am utterly flattered. Thanks so much. =)

-H

Liked the Fish

[eclecticfan]

never saw Olivia as a pet of any type person til now. I'm loving Sparky - Alex coming up with that name, what a hoot

liked that they ended on a more positive note - I'm a sucker for happy endings

kimly

Re: Liked the Fish

[heathers]

Thanks, glad I was able to pull it off. I was a bit nervous about the fish stuff.

-H

*nods* Yep. Sucked in.

[firequill]

OK, I know usually I comment on the fic as a whole, but while reading tonight lines just kept jumping out at me. So I'm commenting er, line by line. Sorry to have reposted half your fic in my comment and all, but this is the way it came to me. :)

A: this? Disclaimer: Clearly not mine or the pairing wouldn't be merely subextual. Bwahahaha! That's the best freakin' disclaimer ever.

Fitting that Alex would be the one to put a name to the one thing I couldn’t.
The angst. *happy sigh* I love angst. Yet... I'm a sucker for a happy ending. *shrug*

...I was sent back out into the rain with a box of minute rice in one hand and an agitated fish in the other.
Don't know why this struck me as so funny, but it made me full on bust up.

Like those nights I come home to ransack my own apartment because it seems like the only safe way to exhaust the rage burning in my chest.
Ouch.

...concupiscence
"Oh god, what does concupiscence mean?" *grin*

Also the whole line, The fight became the foreplay, the storm before the calm of our martini

Re: *nods* Yep. Sucked in.

[heathers]

You give the best feedback ever. I love seeing what parts people like. =D And really, it's so cool that you are reading my girlslash... I think that's the biggest compliment ever. Thanks so much, girl!

-H

Re: *nods* Yep. Sucked in.

[firequill]

I dig girlslash... I usually dig it more when I know who it is... but *grin* I'm not picky as long as it's well writen. This is. Keep on keepin' on!!

-Mandi

re-comment.

[firequill]

OK... so that comment makes me seem like I'll just read any old thing that comes along... I won't... it also makes it seem as though anyone else is just as good as you... they aren't. Um. Yes. Just decided it sounded rude and wanted to clairfy.

[bast2]

heather--this was really good. sparky's story was bitter-sweet, as was olivia and alex's. the ending was just perfect. good work.

i love olvia's tirades of frustration, and sparky's shadow gliding across alex's face. all the little touches...shit--i just like the whole thing.

[heathers]

I'm so very flattered that you enjoyed it. Thanks so much. =)

-H