Knee Deep for totallysoftcore

[heathers]

Title: Knee Deep
Recipient: totallysoftcore
Author: heathers (heathers [at] livejournal [dot] com)
Website: [between.bellvue.&.rikers]
Character/Pairing: Olivia/Alex
Warnings/Spoilers: Season nonspecific.
Summary: "After months of falling in and out of bed with Alex she was back again ... Last call was always good to us that way."
Author's Note: Thanks to lonejaguar for the title

Comments

*nods* Yep. Sucked in.

[firequill]

OK, I know usually I comment on the fic as a whole, but while reading tonight lines just kept jumping out at me. So I'm commenting er, line by line. Sorry to have reposted half your fic in my comment and all, but this is the way it came to me. :)

A: this? Disclaimer: Clearly not mine or the pairing wouldn't be merely subextual. Bwahahaha! That's the best freakin' disclaimer ever.

Fitting that Alex would be the one to put a name to the one thing I couldn’t.
The angst. *happy sigh* I love angst. Yet... I'm a sucker for a happy ending. *shrug*

...I was sent back out into the rain with a box of minute rice in one hand and an agitated fish in the other.
Don't know why this struck me as so funny, but it made me full on bust up.

Like those nights I come home to ransack my own apartment because it seems like the only safe way to exhaust the rage burning in my chest.
Ouch.

...concupiscence
"Oh god, what does concupiscence mean?" *grin*

Also the whole line, The fight became the foreplay, the storm before the calm of our martini infused concupiscence.
Brilliant, and honestly? Wildly sexy.

And I never say no because I am relieved to hear the need in her voice, happy not to be easily forgotten or washed away at the end of the day.
Again with the hurty angsty yum.

...that maybe she is remembering why she keeps coming back. And I’m starting to understand why I keep letting her.
...and there's the happy ending. It's shaky and not full on bliss, but it's a start. The spring of hope, and spark of understanding that you're there for more then what you came for in the first place. You've found what's worth staying for.

Well... I think you've effectivly dragged me into liking these women. I've still never watched a show, and I still have to bring up pics of them to remember which is which *grin* but I enjoy the worlds you let them play in. Excellent as always!

--fq ;)

Re: *nods* Yep. Sucked in.

[heathers]

You give the best feedback ever. I love seeing what parts people like. =D And really, it's so cool that you are reading my girlslash... I think that's the biggest compliment ever. Thanks so much, girl!

-H

Re: *nods* Yep. Sucked in.

[firequill]

I dig girlslash... I usually dig it more when I know who it is... but *grin* I'm not picky as long as it's well writen. This is. Keep on keepin' on!!

-Mandi

re-comment.

[firequill]

OK... so that comment makes me seem like I'll just read any old thing that comes along... I won't... it also makes it seem as though anyone else is just as good as you... they aren't. Um. Yes. Just decided it sounded rude and wanted to clairfy.