Team MetaHumans // 4 Drabbles

May 01, 2010 18:32

I know I'm late, but since I had written these earlier, I wanted to throw them out, even though I'm past the deadline ( Read more... )

character: clark "boy scout" kent, challenge: rain, character: lana lang, character: chloe "watchtower" sullivan, character: pete ross, character: lex luthor, pairing: clark/lex, author: sue_dreams

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danceswithgary May 2 2010, 02:00:46 UTC
I liked the abused metaphors. :-D

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sue_dreams May 2 2010, 02:24:28 UTC
Thank you!

It was fun to write, even if it kind of managed to go all over the place in just 100 words. >D

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ctbn60 May 2 2010, 02:20:40 UTC
Nice very nice! I love the image of wet clark. I think the raining men one is my favorite though. Well done.

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sue_dreams May 2 2010, 02:25:59 UTC
Wet Clark is such a fun image. I thought about staying away, after reading twinsarein's offerings earlier, but... well. There's never too much wet Clark and this was a bit different in tone. (says I)

Thank you! ^__^

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jlvsclrk May 2 2010, 10:27:10 UTC
I'm glad you posted these. I especially liked the one about movie night. Somehow I think they should wind up watching Top Gun - enough action for Pete, enough romance for Lana and Chloe, and enough subtext for Clex.

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sue_dreams May 2 2010, 17:07:15 UTC
I had fun writing them. And the sad thing is, they were all done on time. But I went to work out and then came back and played video games, and my window of opportunity to post was lost...

Oh well. >D I'll take this as a sign to get off my butt for the next challenge and post early.

You're right that Top Gun would have been a better choice for compromise, but... then Clark couldn't have complained about it. And with the boxing in Far and Away, I think there's still some good action. No subtext, sadly, but the Clex can sneak away while everyone else is busy and create their own anagrams.

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flareonfury May 5 2010, 03:13:46 UTC
Your drabbles were done in time, lol, it says you posted at: "1st-May-2010 06:32 pm" which was within the "May 1 at 8PM" which I'm gonna take as you entered just fine.

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twinsarein May 10 2010, 02:19:22 UTC
"It's Raining" was a fun one. I loved how you described Clark's awkwardness, and the thought of Lex guiding him into another rhythm is sexy as hell.

"Movie Night" *snerk* I loved their arguing over which movie, and I enjoyed Clark's thoughts on "Interview..." The last couple of lines were especially funny.

"Gray..." What can I say, the cat's got my tongue. *g* I'm impressed with the variety of cat saying you fit in there. I loved the line, the rain washed away his colors. That really grabbed me.

"Overcast" You make me really want to know what's wrong with poor Chloe. You painted a very sad picture of her in the rain.

These were wonderful additions to the prompt. I was going to say that I sympathize with you being late, since that happened to me last time (although I posted it days late, really and completely forgetting about it), but I see from a comment below that she accepted them. So, that is awesome. Sorry I didn't comment earlier.

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sue_dreams May 10 2010, 04:44:34 UTC
You did get to them, so no worries about the delay in commenting. ^__^ I appreciate that you took the time.

They were quite fun to write and it is very cool that she's letting it count, since they weren't that late. I just fail at time sense sometimes.

I actually wrote them in reverse order of the way I posted them, meaning I started with poor Chloe. Given a few more words, I was thinking of taking it off to femslashy places, but... *shrug* I'm happy with the way it turned out.

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