Team: Metahumans
Challenge: Apples
Rating: all under PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Clex, Clark, Lex, Martha, Jonathon, Nell
Title: Spilled Milk
Characters/Pairings: Lex, Clark, Jonathon, Martha, Nell
Summary: Martha is in tears. Lex is on the case. And that's
terrible. (link totally unrelated) (
Spilled Milk )
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2. Yay, for a naughty Clark. I'm making him my theme this time around. The few apple drabbles I've managed to do so far all feature a naughty Clark. He's so much fun.
3. Oooo, a confident Lex is soooo sexy! Shiver me timbers...and other things are shivering too. *wink*
4. Um...yum? And not because of the apples. Sexy. Also, cool quotes.
5. Um...eek! Lex & Jonathan...eek! Although, fuuuunnny. And the end bit with Clark and Lex having a turn, but no cherry stem. *snicker*
These were awesome and really made me smile. Except the first one. Nell really has to go down.
OMG! I just followed your link at the top. That's hysterical. I'd love to see the rest of the story it's a part of.
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I'm glad you liked them. I originally wrote the dark fic in the middle of this set, but it, um, didn't quite fit. :D
Nell is going down. She doesn't know it yet, but her future is set. Lex will be subtle (he doesn't want Clark to know).
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2. NICE. Bobbing for apples was on my list of ideas; but I could never hope to compete with this.
3. I like this so much:
It was really just a matter of time until he had both anyway.
It's cocky, it's entitled, it's Lex through-and-through. Perfect.
4. "Clark, you ~are~~ the apple."
Oh dear lord, yes.
5. I think Martha is a slash fan. Come on girl, admit it.
Very nice, as always :)
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Also, randomly, in a fiction class I took, this gal wrote a fantastic story of baking revenge. No laxatives, sadly. But the avenger was asked to bake a cake for her opposition because the opposition couldn't bake it for herself. The avenger did so, let the enemy claim it, then sat back while everyone tried it and then made disgusted faces.
Sadly, Nell wouldn't be quite that trusting of Martha, I think. (Though I doubt Martha would bake anything less than a perfect cake. /recall.
2) I'd still love to see what you come up with for bobbing for apples.
5) Martha... is Martha. *shifty looks*
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I'll see if anything brilliant comes to me for apple bobbing; but lightning seldom strikes twice :)
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The first one is great... Martha lost the pie contest, oh no! The link is hysterical. ^^
Your summary on two is perfect. Clark knows the perfect way to get Lex. :) In more ways than one!
The third gives me a bit of shivers at the end... I was all prepared to go happy and then went, uh... o.o Nicely done!
(Amusingly enough, the apple isn't actually mentioned in the bible as the forbidden fruit. But it's totally bible fanon.) The boys' dialog is wonderful - so evocative, so rich. I could see them during it.
And, um, yum on the fifth! I take the fifth and so does Martha and Jonathan. ROTFL... :) That one is kindof yummy, and now we'll go away and hide... ;D
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I'm really glad you liked them! I know the third got...shadowy? It's not overly dark, but it's not quite the happy I was aiming for in the beginning.
The fifth one... I loved writing. It amused me greatly. Martha won't let any of the boys ever forget it.
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Smallville needs its darkness as well as the light - that's our balance. :)
For some weird reason, I actually like Lex/Jonathan in a slightly horrified yet fascinated way (much like Martha, I imagine). Your drabble reminded me of this and I had to go searching on sv_inquiry for some. I feel so dirty now. ;p Yay for apple-wine in the house! ;D
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It doesn't go into detail at all though. I hope you've had good luck in your search.
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1) Hehe!! Nell finally kicked martha's butt in something.
2) (love the title!) I'd have paid to watch clark lick Lex clean! *happy sigh*
3) I really like the progression in this one and the natural conclusion that Lex came to at the end. If lex was a more patient man I think that might exactly be how their relationship worked out! Nice one.
4) This line deserves a prize!!!: "Clark, you ~are~~ the apple. There's no other such fruit in all of Eden."
5) OH MY GOODNESS!!! Jon and Lex locking lips! Hot for some oddly strange reason! ( And that would explain a lot about jon wanting to keep clark away from Lex. Jealousy!) AND clark not waiting for a cherry! hehehe Go clark!!
Very nicely done. I enjoyed these!!!
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I love the apple line from #4 myself, so it makes me very happy that it works for you as well.
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