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jlvsclrk November 1 2009, 01:50:35 UTC
Another great set. I'm amazed at how much story you packed into the first one. Lex of course expects rejection and Jonathan seems to be giving it to him, but no, he really was just focused on the truck for a moment. Great to see Jonathan on board with the Clex.

And the last one is great too. Here the word economy of a drabble really works for you - reducing the offer to share the secret to its essence.

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sue_dreams November 1 2009, 02:22:26 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked them. Sometimes, the ideas I get in a drabble work out really well. Sometimes, I have to struggle between words to keep and chop, and I don't always feel like I've made the best choice.

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nonotthatone November 2 2009, 01:35:40 UTC
Oh, I'm a sucker for accepting!Jonathan. Nice.

Heehee, spellcasting and liquor love - and Clexiness. Trifecta.

Irises are amazing, and you're right: they would look fantastic with tulips. Great detail.

I'm also a sucker for Clark telling Lex the truth. Even if Lex has to force it out of him. I like that it's not all ok at the end, either. This really rang my bell.

... and again. I've tried working with the room but I'm not sure I succeeded; my Lex didn't have the guts to destroy it. I like that yours does.

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sue_dreams November 2 2009, 02:15:55 UTC
A fic I rather like deals with the room. Lex shows it to Clark, expecting him to be scared off, and instead, Clark is also kind of stalkerish and obsessive. It's apparently a Kryptonian mating thing.

So this room that in canon causes serious issues, and anywhere else should be a negative thing, was made positive.

I don't know yet what Lex will do with that room, in other stories. Here, it made sense, but... yeah. I don't blame your Lex for keeping it around.

I'm glad you liked them.

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nonotthatone November 2 2009, 03:24:00 UTC
I think I've read that fic too actually. An excellent flip of the script.

Not to pimp, but here was my attempt. My thought was: Lex is a collector. If he can't have Clark, he needs something to hold the place.

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