Too Far! *Chapter 5*

Sep 19, 2009 14:57

Title: Too Far!
Chapters: 5
Pairing: YabuHika, Inoobu, Hikadai, Inoodai
Genre: Angsty Fluff I guess
Rating: Pg-13
Disclaimer Obviously not mine, you can’t own people! Maybe in the past, but not now!
Summary: After being caught in the act, by Hikaru, Yabu must convince his lover that he really does love him and that this “accident” was only to ( Read more... )

story: too far, fanfiction: multi-chapter, hsj: inoo kei, hsj: yaotome hikaru, hsj: yabu kota, hsj: arioka daiki

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kebinu September 19 2009, 19:50:07 UTC
omg its just as sad as your other stories D:!!! now im all D: and stuffs >< not fun DX but damn, thats some powerful writing there hun >< i liked it, even tho it was horribly sad D: now the only medicine is some massive fluff overload!

and see now i comment your work :]

loves~!
-ケビヌ

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suteii September 25 2009, 18:02:50 UTC
Omg I am so sorry that it has taken me this long to update, I feel so bad that I have been so overworked that I haven't been abel to reply.

I do try to stay around the same genre because that is what I know how to right, I'm glad you liked it though and I'm sorry I made you sad.

I'm glad you comment on my work, you have no idea how much comments mean to me. Thanks

<3 Stephie

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kebinu September 25 2009, 18:07:23 UTC
lmao s'ok~! ive kinda been dead on LJ anyways XD i still lack inspiration to finish my story >_> my muse has left me D:

lmao it's kool, it's kool, it just shows how powerful your writing is if it makes someone feel so emotional about it! XD

haha actually i think i commented on something else before, but you never like, commented back on it XD i forgot which story i commented tho XD

♪ケビヌ

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suteii September 25 2009, 18:18:58 UTC
I hate it when i lose my muse, to get it back i usually re-read the entire thing that I've written and it usually comes back to me. Or I try to put myself in the same mind frame as I was in when I started writing it. It's hard to do but it works.

I'm glad you think my writing is powerful. I do try, so I'm glad to be acknowledged for it. thanks

OMG I did! I need to go find that comment then....that will take a while...meh it will give me something to do other than homework. XD

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helbus_421 September 19 2009, 23:17:22 UTC
omg Yabu loves three people at the same time, >< even though my otp is InooBu, this time YabuHika is just too sad. baka Yabu, breaking both their hearts. and he slapped Hikaru as well. >< i love this story. "throws confetti" hmm im missing one "c" nee but i just cant think of any thing to criticize you on. =P i cant wait for the last chapter but i dont want it to end either. -3-

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suteii September 25 2009, 18:05:51 UTC
I am so sorry that I haven't been able to get back to you until now, I feel so bad that I've been swamped with homework every since school started once again.

But yes Yabu is crazily in love with way too many people but unfortunately for Hikaru, Yabu will never know what it is like to love and lost.

CONFETTI!!!! Oh my you just made my day I love virtual confetti and whenever I get it it just makes me really happy, Thank-you

I know what you mean by the last chapter, it's almost done though so don't worry, things will be interesting and hopefully I don't dissapoint you too much with it.

Thanks
<3 Stephie

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keeconk October 18 2009, 20:20:03 UTC
huaaaaa!!!!
hikaru!! T___T
*off to next chappie*

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suteii October 19 2009, 17:34:09 UTC
Oh no poor Hikaru...What will happen.

thanks for reading

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stevenica October 22 2009, 08:21:54 UTC
OH MY, STEPHIE!!!
I can't stop reading this tho I'm gonna miss my bus & be late for lecture O__O!
THIS IS SO GOOD!!!
AND GOSH, I'M TOTALLY CRYING READING THIS towards the last half~! Especially when Yabu was blabbling nonsense & slapped my poor Hikari-chan TAT
U know how much I love Hikaru... so I was totally heart-broken when you hurt him here with that playboy D:
...literally tears well up in my eyes...
anyway, I'm reli gonna miss my bus now if I dun shut down my computer right this mo...
Comments will be added later >< gomen
Love ya -3-

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