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chibilover14 March 8 2009, 00:39:31 UTC
UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH~!!!! IT'S ALREADY OVER???? ;______________;

*THROWS CONFETTI AT YOU* BUT CONGRATS!!! But I'm very happy to read this fic~! The longest ficcy ever and first trilogy ever? LOL But wow... I bet you planned the 100 days. xD

And yush you and your angst. LOL I could never write like this or this long for the matter but I do envy you! xD

OVERALL, LOVED THE FICCY! *FLAILS* I'M SO GLAD EVERYTHING WORKED OUT IN THE END~! AND EVERYONE ISH HAPPY HAPPY! *HUGS*

OMFG, POOR DAI-CHAN WHO FINALLY BROKE. ;___; AND YAY TO BOTH OF THEM WAKING UP! ;___; And I'm very happy with the extremely fluffy Yabunoo at the end. xD

Inoo nodded, “I love you Yabu Kota; I love you so much that I wasn’t able to function without you. My body became like this because I couldn’t bear being in this world without you ( ... )

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suteii March 9 2009, 01:23:15 UTC
What do you mean by "already over"? It's been so long since it started and no I did not plan the 100 days, it just happened to be that way exactly. Truthfully I wanted it done like 6 chapters ago, but that didn't happen. Thank-you for the congratulations though. I appreciate it and for the comment, I haven't received a comment from you on this trilogy in awhile. So I MUST thank-you for that ( ... )

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chibilover14 March 13 2009, 01:58:04 UTC
LMAO. Time just goes by so fast ne? xDDD And how perfect! LOL
Oh wow... xD we can't help but write a lot ne? *GLOMPS* HAHA I KNOW RIGHT? I'm sorry. xD *HUGS* But know that I was lurking and didn't feel like commenting at ALL. x___X But last week I got in the commenting mode somehow... so yeah. And also, i can't seem to reply to 50 comments over the weekdays! DDARN SCHOOL! *GLOMPS* But of course I shall comment on the last chappy. xP

EH? That only happens when I'm EMO. LOL NUUU~! NONEXISTENT SKILLS! LOL

It ish? xD Try writing pure fluff. xD

Haha true. But I loved how you phrased it. xP

YAY FOR TAKAYAMA~ OF COURSE I WILL CATCH IT AND GO ASLKDJFA LSDF ON IT. XD *FLAILS* I love how you sneak things in. xP

Love criticism? xD Me the opposite. xP Nuuu~! Because it reminds me of those really long books... and then I die. xD More like I stat skimming and stuff. xD No need to be sorry! just meh opinion. xD

YUSH! *THROWS MORE CONFETTI AT YOU* XD YUSH! I'M FIRST! 8RUNS AROUND AND GLOMPS*

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suteii March 13 2009, 02:53:31 UTC
Yeah, I really can't help but write a lot, It's bad sometimes. I figured you had read it even if I didn't get a comment from you, I didn't think you'd pass up the oppurtunity to read something hinted on Takayama.

Well my angsty fics come from me being emo as well, of course the music I listen to while writing my fics helps a great deal too! I don't think that I'd be able to write pure fluff, I'd die of cavities or something....I should try it, It'd fail but I don't really care.

Thank-you, I love how I sneak things in and hint at things to make people's minds actually go with the story and then abruptly ending it to create a cliff hanger is like one of my favourite things to do *ashamed*

CONFETTI!!!!! I LOVE CONFETTI!!!! *flails, glomps you back and jumps in confetti* XDDDD

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suteii March 9 2009, 01:15:04 UTC
Gosh so much incoherency. But I know what you mean, I can't believe it's over either, I almost cried when I hit that last post button. It was a sad yet happy moment.

Wouldn't you want proof? I would, if they didn't believe I'd whip out the proof and prove them all wrong. XD. Oh yes pissed off Daiki is scary. Mental Note "Never Piss off Arioka Daiki". It's always the cute ones who will lash back, the unsuspecting ones.

WOOT CONFETTI!!!! Yup Yabu has finally awoke. Proud? Damn boy is so damn lucky. I was jealous in writing his character. Sorry I had to throw Daiki's height complex in there somehow ( ... )

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raichii March 8 2009, 05:02:46 UTC
I totally love it.

Both of them woke up!!! Yatta!! And they confessed to each other... So sweet!

*throws u lots and lots of confetti's* Good job!

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suteii March 9 2009, 00:48:22 UTC
I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for reading and commenting

Thanks for the confetti I LOVE CONFETTI!!!!

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had to fix because it exceeded.. LOL!!! sorry it's soo long. >:X kore_dake March 8 2009, 07:30:37 UTC
-apparently commenting while reading-
you added humor into it. even though that part was sort of a serious part. that's hard to pull of.. GOOD JOB!! Hikaru the Humorous will never change, that's a relief.. Ahhh.. Daiki the Calm isn't the calm anymore. He has a dark side. LOL.

YABU WOKE UP!!!! TT_TT -happy~~- Ahh now Inoo is unconscious...
Silence over took the hotel room as Daiki chatted on the phone with Yabu. They were happy. Their storm was almost over.
almost... doesn't literally mean it's over.. i have a bad feeling about this..

“Arigatou gozaimasu” Yabu said to the doctor and he stepped out. “Only Dai-chan, that is definitely weird, he’ll break soon.”
Uh-oh... Daiki the Calm HANG IN THERE. ahhh!!! oh no! MORE problems surface..

you are...with Inoo-chan...congratulations...he’s probably a wreck right now, he cares about you... He was always jealous of Ya-Ya-Yah’s relationship with you...I told him...we were just friends...but it took time for him to realize...he has been in love with you...you in love with him... You two love ( ... )

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Re: had to fix because it exceeded.. LOL!!! sorry it's soo long. >:X suteii March 9 2009, 00:47:06 UTC
YAY another long comment! I LOVE COMMENTS!!

Yup humour is fun, I like fun, Daiki so totally does have a dark side.... hehehehe and I'm the one to bring it out *shines halo above head...it breaks into two and sticks in head*

Shoon cares about Yabu, as a brother, of course he'd be worried and tell it to him straight and calling him a baka just made it better in my mind, another jam at telling him what was what.

I can't believe you wrote "the Onion is awake" hahahahaha lol actually monijadechan was beside me when I was reading your comment and she was like wtf so i had to explain to her, her reactions were amusing.

Takaki the Cool Protector eh? That doesn't work but Takaki the Protector does! It just doesn't work with the "Cool" in there.

OMG OMG OMG OMG SO MUCH CONFETTI AND IT'S ALL FOR MEEEEEEE!!!!!!*jumps in confetti*

you didn't spam me, trust me. Thank-you for reading and commenting

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Re: had to fix because it exceeded.. LOL!!! sorry it's soo long. >:X kore_dake March 9 2009, 00:54:23 UTC
AHHAHAHA!!! AHH!! Your HALO broke!! hahahahha scary~~

HAHAH!!! Well she didn't know what it was about. AHAHA! Yes The Onion is awake. hahahha

I was reconsidering the whole Takaki the Cool Protector thing as i was typing it. it didn't flow as well. and Protector sounded better by itself.
TAKAKI THE PROTECTOR~~~

8 down 2 to go. LOL.

YAY!~~~

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Re: had to fix because it exceeded.. LOL!!! sorry it's soo long. >:X suteii March 9 2009, 01:28:03 UTC
yup the halo broke, into devil horns XD because I'm evil.

Yeah she didn't know so I had to explain it, it was funny.

Yup 8 down and two to go, maybe we should consult some people or something, I mean we could use Cool for Yamada since he tries to be cool but~ I dont know

"Yamada the Cool" sounds weird and you wanted strawberry in it as well so it would be like Yamada the Cool Strawberry...it flows a little better but still no....we need to think of something

and Keito, what in the world are we going to do for Keito. Why is he so hard? oops dirty joke.

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tokidoki_sama March 8 2009, 08:35:28 UTC
Yay! It's finished! :D

I really liked the ending! I'm glad everyone ended up all happy-sunshiny-unicorn land happy!!! LOL That doen't make much sense... XD

I enjoyed the whole thing! But... I noticed something...

I could be mistaken... but didn't you say that this fic would be like... from the perspective the Seven members? Just to make it clear I'm not pointing this out as a criticism... rather... showing how much a fic evolves from it's original intent. Even I do that! XD I just thought it was funny... because I do it too! LOL Wow... I'm really bad at explaining this... I just sound like a jerk... DON'T LISTEN TO ANYTHING I SAY! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT...

But yeah... I really loved this fic! :D I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us down the road! :D

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suteii March 9 2009, 00:36:01 UTC
Happy-Sunshiny-Unicorn Land Happy? Oh God. That is certainly an interesting way to put it though. Interesting perspective.

OMG YOU ARE SO TOTALLY RIGHT!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT I DIDN'T DO THAT...I THINK I WAS GOOD WITH IT UNTIL YABU FAINTED AND THEN JUST WENT BACK TO NORMAL POV, now that I think about it. I AM SOOOOO SORRY!!!.

Thank-you for pointing that out *smacks own head*. Thank-you for reading and commenting too! And you don't sound like a jerk. Don't worry about it.

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tokidoki_sama March 9 2009, 01:04:24 UTC
Well like I said... it's not a critisism... I was just showing how ideas evolve... it's part of being a writer... LOL Don't worry about it...

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suteii March 9 2009, 01:28:54 UTC
But I do worry about it since well I said it and it didn't happen which meant that I lied to everybody DX

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