Not as Clueless as Believed *Final Chapter Part 2*

[suteii]

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[tokidoki_sama]

Yay! It's finished! :D

I really liked the ending! I'm glad everyone ended up all happy-sunshiny-unicorn land happy!!! LOL That doen't make much sense... XD

I enjoyed the whole thing! But... I noticed something...

I could be mistaken... but didn't you say that this fic would be like... from the perspective the Seven members? Just to make it clear I'm not pointing this out as a criticism... rather... showing how much a fic evolves from it's original intent. Even I do that! XD I just thought it was funny... because I do it too! LOL Wow... I'm really bad at explaining this... I just sound like a jerk... DON'T LISTEN TO ANYTHING I SAY! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT...

But yeah... I really loved this fic! :D I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us down the road! :D

[suteii]

Happy-Sunshiny-Unicorn Land Happy? Oh God. That is certainly an interesting way to put it though. Interesting perspective.

OMG YOU ARE SO TOTALLY RIGHT!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT I DIDN'T DO THAT...I THINK I WAS GOOD WITH IT UNTIL YABU FAINTED AND THEN JUST WENT BACK TO NORMAL POV, now that I think about it. I AM SOOOOO SORRY!!!.

Thank-you for pointing that out *smacks own head*. Thank-you for reading and commenting too! And you don't sound like a jerk. Don't worry about it.

[tokidoki_sama]

Well like I said... it's not a critisism... I was just showing how ideas evolve... it's part of being a writer... LOL Don't worry about it...

[suteii]

But I do worry about it since well I said it and it didn't happen which meant that I lied to everybody DX

[tokidoki_sama]

No you didn't lie... silly you... I think it should be a learning experience. Now you know it's not such a good idea to tell what exactly your fic is going to be. I'm mean tell them what it's about.. but not too much... Um.. am I making any sense? No... not really.. LOL I guess what I'm trying to say is just don't tell details like this... keep them guessing... sort of like with my fic... *shameless self promotion* I don't know how for you've read.. or if you've read... I think I remember that you read the first chapter at least.. LOL well on to my point... I never said anything about what the plot will really be, that way I wouldn't give any crucial info away... try that next time...

gosh.. I don't really make any sense... LOL

[suteii]

Well you see, this wasn't supposed to go as long as it did. It was supposed to stop as soon as they found out the truth. So techinically I didn't really lie, because it was 7's POV until then, then things just elaborated on from there.

You make tons of sense, and yes I have read your story, I finally had time today to read Chapter 4 and 5 that were posted, sorry about the lapse in time and my awful comments DX

[tokidoki_sama]

Well... regardless.. it's just an observation... I wouldn't loose any sleep over it. People still read it and liked it right? So then I guess they don't care or don't remember... You wrote a great story and that's all that counts! :D

LOL ... sorry about the shameless self promotion... I'm terrible arn't I? XD And don't worry about it! I know your busy... I get busy too! :D So it's all good!

And any comment is a good comment... none are awful...

[suteii]

You must have a very good memory since you were the only person to point it out. Yay You!

shameless self promotions are fun, dont worry about it, besides your story is awesome...i just fail at expressing at how awesome it actually is XD

that is true there are no awful comments, but i still feel like i could have commented better or something