Fic: Limbo

Apr 06, 2012 05:01

Title: Limbo
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Fandom: The Closer
Rating: M/NC-17
Word Count: 1,834
Summary: It was supposed be just an affair. And that is all it ever will be.
Disclaimer: Not mine
A/N:  This was supposed to be something fun and it turned into angst. So be warned.
A/N2: I'm honestly not begging for comments here, but the number of reviews has ( Read more... )

pairing: brenda/sharon, title: limbo, fandom: the closer, rating: m

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silverstarsmile April 6 2012, 03:12:50 UTC
Helloooooo new fic! I liked this. The smut was hot (you are really quite good) and poor, poor Sharon. My heart was just breaking for her. Thank you!

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surena_13 April 6 2012, 17:36:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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So GOOD ext_1083387 April 6 2012, 03:27:04 UTC
This was filled with so much hotness and so much Sharon angst! I love everything about it! Your writing is so beautiful! Thank you for all of your amazing fics. I think there should be a part two to this at some point because I would love to know if there is a last time or if they can be together. Sharon made me feel so many feels...well you did lol...but seriously poor Sharon! ♥

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Re: So GOOD surena_13 April 6 2012, 17:38:14 UTC
Thanks! I don't know if there will be second part, but I might try if inspiration strikes.

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Re: So GOOD giovannia April 9 2012, 00:02:58 UTC
Hope inspiration strikes, this was lovely.

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Re: So GOOD surena_13 April 9 2012, 15:45:12 UTC
Thanks! Me too.

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swtlilsophie April 6 2012, 03:34:06 UTC
I am so bad about leaving comments. That's awful, I know! But I loooove your writing! You write the perfect mix of hot and angst. It seems there is an overload of angst in the Brenda/Sharon fandom right now! Which I love and hate at the same time:) Need some fluff in my life. Thank you for all of your AWESOME fics!

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surena_13 April 6 2012, 17:42:55 UTC
Well, thank you for leaving a comment now! I'm bad at leaving comments too, so I'm going to work on that. But in this fandom the number of people who leave comments has gone down a lot. So I just wanted to know if it was me or the fandom.

And I think usually when half of the pairing is married in canon, the fanfiction gets angsty. Unless you go for AU with divorce and everything, but I think Brenda/Sharon are generally a very hot and angsty pairing.

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kdtb April 6 2012, 08:41:59 UTC
Omg I fucking love angsty Sharon so much its probably illegal. The minute I got to the "Love you." part I immediately stopped reading and had to take a few breaths cuz I knew I'd end up weepy by the end. Ugh you're so good at this!! Plus their lovemaking is so damn hot and like... unf. All of it was so believable and heartbreaking/good.

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surena_13 April 6 2012, 17:46:28 UTC
Thank you! Angsty Sharon might be one of my favorites, though I do love it when she's kind of cocky and domineering too.
I'm really glad it was believable. I was afraid that maybe the switch in the story was bit much, so I'm glad it worked.

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margotgrissom April 6 2012, 09:24:29 UTC
I know you warned for angst. But still. I hate you (only not).

Actually got slightly teary-eyed at the end because I felt so sorry for Sharon. Well-written and perfectly IC as always, good job!

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surena_13 April 6 2012, 17:48:10 UTC
It always means so much to me when you say it's IC! Especially when I try to write more than just sex.
Sorry, about the angst though. I hadn't planned it. It just sort of happened.

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