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surena_13

Fic: Limbo

Apr 06, 2012 05:01

Title: Limbo
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Fandom: The Closer
Rating: M/NC-17
Word Count: 1,834
Summary: It was supposed be just an affair. And that is all it ever will be.
Disclaimer: Not mine
A/N: This was supposed to be something fun and it turned into angst. So be warned.
A/N2: I'm honestly not begging for comments here, but the number of reviews has ( Read more... )

pairing: brenda/sharon, title: limbo, fandom: the closer, rating: m

Comments 26

bsgroxmysox April 6 2012, 12:59:45 UTC

Oh no! Poor Sharon! I just want to give her a hug but I know it's not my arms she wants wrapped around her!

This really made me feel all the feels! I would love to know what happened after this! How did Brenda feel when she went home to Fritz after confessing her love to another woman?

Oh the angst is so sad but in such a good way. Great story...loved it :D

surena_13 April 6 2012, 18:56:07 UTC

Thank you! I don't if I'll write some sort of sequel. I hadn't actually planned on going this angsty, but I might give it a try.

lindy999 April 6 2012, 14:09:52 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful. Wouldn't mind having this one continue on to see what happens.

surena_13 April 6 2012, 18:57:25 UTC

Thanks! I don't know about a sequel, but I might a give it try at one time or another.

ubiquitousmixie April 6 2012, 14:13:37 UTC

i really loved this fic - the angst was so beautifully done. you managed to make this very real and very potent, especially by capturing how hard it is for sharon since she knows how they don't really have a chance together. it broke my heart...especially since there isn't much hope for a happy ending here.

thanks for sharing another perfect story with us!

surena_13 April 6 2012, 19:01:22 UTC

Thank you! I think that with Brenda's marriage and all, in canon, this pairing doesn't have a lot of hope for a happy ending.

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surena_13 April 6 2012, 19:03:50 UTC

Thanks! No, not much good can come from an affair. Even if Brenda did leave Fritz, I don't think that Brenda or Sharon could ever be truly happy, knowing that it broke up a marriage even if they do love each other.

ldellis65 April 6 2012, 22:05:05 UTC

Sorry for not commenting. I read them all but, alas, I am a slacker in this area.

Fantastic as always. Thanks for still taking the time to write 'em even if I rarely (or never) take the time to review.

surena_13 April 9 2012, 02:07:28 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't trying to force people who never comment to comment. I was just trying to figure out if it was my writing or just generally people slacking in that department (I know I have, so it was as much a shout out to other people as it was to myself)

But thank you for taking the time to leave a comment!