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[chuchama]

Or does it explode? | they get out the car, they smile. | 373 words | a/n: a dream deferred and all that.

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[chuchama]

I approve of this reaction.

[magickismight]

so for a moment i almost cried because i thought taemin was dead.
but then it turned happy (ish?) so it's all good :'D

[chuchama]

I thought about killing him for a second but that wasn't what I was going for? Or rather I couldn't, I wasn't in the angst-killing-characters-off mood when I wrote it.

[soasian101]

What happened to Minho. ._. (just curious, but I lovelovelove your style)

[chuchama]

I don't remember why he wasn't there. I think I was going for a 'realistic style' (I wrote this a while ago so what my thought process was then and what I was trying to do is questionable) and Minho seems like he's gone the most often from group stuff doing other things. He was probably on Star King or some variety show or in Canada or something? MAYBE HE DIED IN THE CAR FROM THE EXPLOSION? Ha ha no, I seriously can't even justify it since I don't remember and this was like a ten minute writing exercise. (my ineptness aside, thank you!)

[lunayeppeo]

I swear I felt my heart stop when Onew was silently panicking over Taemin, and then start up again when Key said, "What the hell." .____.

Love this drabble. So powerful for such a quick exercise. *A*

[r_hr_maniac]

I kind of stopped breathing the first time you mentioned Taemin not breathing and the second time when you mentioned Jonghyun having been thrown somewhere in the crowd. Just, uh, not a pretty image in my head...but awesome nonetheless ♥

Minho was totally off filming Dream Team in Narnia or god knows where.