Savior (Chapter 9 part 2)

Oct 16, 2009 18:36

Shou walked through the doors of the flat building, using his own human strength to push it open and walk across the carpeted flooring. He had been with Murai for a long time discussing theories, expressions, history, and any other questions Shou had about Murai’s encounters with the human world. Despite their conversation he never once skimmed ( Read more... )

alice nine, chapter 9 part 2, savior, shouxhiroto

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karol_uchiha October 16 2009, 20:28:28 UTC
OH MY GOD!!!
Wait Wait ç.ç"... Everytime I read it I .... how can I explain it? ... o.o"...

It is like flying? o.o" Bungee jumping?! It is AMAZING to see how much this fic affects me

I feel like I'm part of the story and it is amazing *-*" It is great, I love it :D

Owwnn I want to read more *-*"

Shou is more human now.. o.o I'm curious to see how he's going to deal with it. There's more problems comming for them... right?

Maruyama is disgusting ._. I want to kill him very slowly and painfully e.é" ...

I wonder what Tora will do now that Shou confessed to Hiroto ._. ....
This scares me i.i"

Well I loved it, again *-*"
It is as good as always, if not better!
The more I read the more I love \o/

See ya *-*" Update soon \o/ and Keep going

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karol_uchiha October 16 2009, 20:28:42 UTC
FIRST!! *-*

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karol_uchiha October 16 2009, 20:34:45 UTC
Oh ç.ç"... I forgot to say...

Shou-chan is so cute *-*" , I love him \o/ *dies*

That's not what I wanted to say u.u

About the last scene, it was so cute Hiroto stopping and thinking about how innocent Shou-kun may be. It was so sweet... And it is something that makes me curious xD"

It would be so nice if it was HirotoxShou....

Ok stopped u.ú" Sorry, just saying that I love this part *-*"

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superhappynao October 19 2009, 01:29:51 UTC
Awww thank you so much for your lovely comment!!! I never thought that the story would have such an affect but I'm honoured that it does!!! *big cheesy grin*

I really need to keep updating then!! :D

There will definitely be problems, and it's gonna be Tora mainly >.< he scares me too XD
Maruyama is evil... but don't worry, he should get what's coming to him just like anyone would do in reality *nods*

And yeah! I was leading into something like HirotoxShou but I'm not sure right now... I'll have to decide later! (Is it a good idea? I don't know!! XD)

Thank you sooo much for reading and commenting again! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :D

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vampiremilly October 16 2009, 22:15:56 UTC
eek! so cute!! Ack! poor Hiroto! darn you maruyama!! you dare touch Shou's pon?! lol. these two are just two cute together. ^3^ this is so romantic and wonderful and and-*explosion* ehehe, you get the idea...

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superhappynao October 19 2009, 01:31:51 UTC
XDD I know! How dare he!? (I wrote it and I'm still angry! XD)
I'm really glad you think so! I had a bit of trouble writing it so I'm glad its worked out XD
Thank you for reading and commenting, It's very much appreciated!!! I'm very gratefull for the support :3

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miki_baka October 17 2009, 04:13:50 UTC
Waaaaah! The end is so sweet!
Poor Hiroto! And I'm sad for Saga too >.<
I like the moment when Shou was angry about maruyama è_é Really romantic yeah! I'm in love of the end!

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superhappynao October 19 2009, 01:32:48 UTC
Aaa thank you so much!! It was quite a sad chapter, but it did get very romantic at the end and I'm glad you loved it!
Thank you very much for reading and commenting :DD

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superhappynao October 19 2009, 01:35:45 UTC
Aaahaha yup I remember! (I'm totally over the moon that people comment on my stuff so I remember when it happens! XD)

Exactly what I thought - stupid man strength issues! They're very easy to manipulate for fanfiction though XDDD althoug that makes me look like i'm taking the easy route out of creating drama... meh it's normally the kind of drama men make anywho.

I'm working on updating soon! I'm getting more into writing, so hopefully I'll be done soon. And yes it's definitely ok! I've added you back :) thank you very much for reading, commenting and giving me lots of support! :DD

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beyondtheremix October 19 2009, 03:06:14 UTC
YES! FINALLY! >_<
Tora... EALGHLKFHF I keep coming back to that "if an angel can feel/do such and such than is it really wrong?" thing. If an angel can become human to be with a human he loves it can't really be bad right? XD But then again... humans can kill and that's wrong... ahhh but humans are humans!! I'm going to believe in Shou and his angel goodness ♥

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superhappynao October 21 2009, 00:46:50 UTC
You're totally right! If they can choose to live as a human then they can choose their own emotion! And without the bad things in life there wouldn't be good things!
Definitely believe in Shou's goodness ~♥ hehehe
Thanks again for reading! And commenting of course! I should update soon... I hope... I'll try... XDDDD

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