title: us before them PART TWO pairing: suchen rating: r genre: slice of life, romance, friendship summary: junmyeon laughs a million years after the punchline.
Oh. I loved it <3 It was really nice and smooth. I really like your writing style, I could read for hours. I was scared they wouldn't end together but yay they did ! Thank you for sharing ♥
oh i really enjoyed reading this > u < junmyeon is such an insecure little baby i sure hope that he's alright irl((oh my god i hate the thought of him being sad and depressed)) i love the way you write junmyeon and jongdae in the story :) hurhur them having pre-debut sex is pretty asdjkfkgllh hahaha! lmao did i actually say pre-debut sex???that's kinda weird lol but you know what i mean XD ahh i like that it ended well <3 and with talks of pizza I like pizza
Magical, truly wonderful! This is the kind of canon that I could see happening which makes the fic even more raw, emotional and touching. Loved it! Thanks a lot for sharing!!
I really loves this. Personally, there was something really enticing to your writing style that made me wolf down the story in one swift go. I am in love with the portrayal of Joonmyeon and Jongdae in this, and also the ending that rounded the story up so well. Definitely goes into my favourites!
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It was really nice and smooth. I really like your writing style, I could read for hours. I was scared they wouldn't end together but yay they did !
Thank you for sharing ♥
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you're welcome and thank /you/ for reading~
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junmyeon is such an insecure little baby
i sure hope that he's alright irl((oh my god i hate the thought of him being sad and depressed))
i love the way you write junmyeon and jongdae in the story :)
hurhur them having pre-debut sex is pretty asdjkfkgllh hahaha!
lmao did i actually say pre-debut sex???that's kinda weird lol but you know what i mean XD
ahh i like that it ended well <3 and with talks of pizza
I like pizza
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Thank you for reading!!
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This is the kind of canon that I could see happening which makes the fic even more raw, emotional and touching.
Loved it!
Thanks a lot for sharing!!
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