OMG, that was fascinating, the end especially. I love moments when Clark does something Clark Kent Doesn't Do and it shocks everybody. Your characterizations are incredible, they are so fantastically real. I can't wait for the next chapter, I really hope you continue this cliffhanger.
Hi, by the way! I've been lurking for awhile (also as Aurnien at FFN) ;)
ha ha! Those moments are my favorites, and a guilty pleasure responsible for the Grand Plot of this story: an excuse to torture the rage out of Clark Kent.
I love this chapter because now you've got the ball rolling. The characters have been established, we know what to expect from them and then wham, they do something different and the story takes another pace.
You know, that is EXACTLY what this chapter does and I didn't even realize it...
Sorry I don't have anything more intelligent than that. :p
(Drunk!Lois is ROTFLtime. XD )
"You know, you're like the Pied Piper to Hell, Lois,"
Bwahaha!
One of the Planet's secret weapons, hidden in Lois' shadow, Perry knew that the mild mannered reporter deserved an award that did not exist (save Sainthood)
*snorfle*
Almost as responsible for her ground breaking journalism as she was, being Clark Kent meant only so much when you stood next to Lois Lane, and Perry lamented the unsung efforts in the man before him: rather than recognition for his researching, fielding, or editing her stories, Clark instead stood silent in his most important role as a vital sustaining force in her life
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So, you think this chapter was funny? because I was hoping someone would comment on what I intended to be a little lightheartedness. This story is meant to be HILARIOUS and recently I've worried that there's a bit too much angst...
And I knew people would be heavy on the Clark vs Richard aspect, especially as it comes out of left field right at the end... But you encourage me! SO YAY!
1) Office drinking parties definitely operate like this. Granted, not in the middle of the week and in the office, but I enjoyed the "Pied Piper to Hell" leading the drinking charge with buzzwords
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Hi, by the way! I've been lurking for awhile (also as Aurnien at FFN) ;)
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ha ha! Those moments are my favorites, and a guilty pleasure responsible for the Grand Plot of this story: an excuse to torture the rage out of Clark Kent.
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A ficcer after my own heart! ♥ Keep it up! xD
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You know, that is EXACTLY what this chapter does and I didn't even realize it...
Awesome.
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Sorry I don't have anything more intelligent than that. :p
(Drunk!Lois is ROTFLtime. XD )
"You know, you're like the Pied Piper to Hell, Lois,"
Bwahaha!
One of the Planet's secret weapons, hidden in Lois' shadow, Perry knew that the mild mannered reporter deserved an award that did not exist (save Sainthood)
*snorfle*
Almost as responsible for her ground breaking journalism as she was, being Clark Kent meant only so much when you stood next to Lois Lane, and Perry lamented the unsung efforts in the man before him: rather than recognition for his researching, fielding, or editing her stories, Clark instead stood silent in his most important role as a vital sustaining force in her life ( ... )
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And I knew people would be heavy on the Clark vs Richard aspect, especially as it comes out of left field right at the end... But you encourage me! SO YAY!
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