NCIS - fanfiction: To Be Loved By Loved Ones - Part Two

[sunshine_sean]

Author: Steph
Fandom: NCIS
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Rating: K
Warnings: Child Abuse, Violence
Characters: Anthony DiNozzo, Leroy Jethro Gibbs, Kelly Gibbs
Summary: "And what do you want for Christmas, Anthony?"

Author's Note: I know I said this was going to be a two-shot but I've been writing and writing ans suddenly I had more than 7.000 words

Comments

[no_name_product]

NOOOOOO TOOOONYY!! :D
sorry ehm yer really nice and cute and sooooo sad but thats... a good thing if ya know what i mean ehm yer....
gibs is soooooooooo sweeeet! xDDDD
luvs ya :-*

[sunshine_sean]

Yessss, I know what you mean. If not me, who will?! :P

LuvYa2
:-*

[courtberger]

I can't wait for more! Poor Tony! I love this! This is really, really good! :D

Court

[sunshine_sean]

Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm sorry to tell you that I probably won't be able to post the last part before Monday. I'll do my best, though. I hope you can last that long(?)

Anyway, thanks for making me happy.

♥ Steph

[courtberger]

Of course! The best things in life are always worth waiting for :D

Court

[redsnake05]

That was sad and creepy and even sadder. *snivels*. Good work.

[sunshine_sean]

You need Kleenex? Just bought some since I wanted to re-watch Hiatus this evening. I'm willing to share ;)

The end won't be that sad at all. Well, a bit maybe but not that sad.

♥ Steph

[redsnake05]

Thanks for adding me as a friend. I've added you back so that I can read your fics as they turn up - I'm really interested in your writing. I just thought I'd check - you do know I'm mainly an HP slash writer, right?

[sunshine_sean]

Uhm... I didn't before, but I know now. I like HP but when I rarely read any fanfics except NCIS and Heroes. Only if someone asks nicely ;) I'd probably read more fanfics in other fandoms if I had more time, but that's not the case so I especially read and write NCIS stories.

[citymusings]

Love it. Looking forward to part 3.

[sunshine_sean]

I hope I'll be able to post it soon.

Thank you.

[loozy]

Just read both chapers, and I have to say, this works :) in the beginning, I was a wee bit apprehensive about the whole mixed- up timeline etc, but you make it work very well :)

Shannon and Kelly are pretty much like I imagined them to be, and it's interesting to read about a Gibbs as a Gunny...

Of course, the angst is wonderful... I got goose bumps :)

Cannot wait for the next chapter, please update soon...

[sunshine_sean]

Thanks for the nice review. It's good to hear that some people have the bravery to voice their doubts - even if they have vanished after reading.

You got goose bumps? Well, that makes me definitely proud :) And good to hear that I measured up to your expectations about Shannon and Kelly. Actually I never analyzed their characters so I'm happy to read that you like them in my story.

So, once again thanks for the review. I wanted to post the last chapter a week ago already but I'm stuck with exams so I don't have too much time to write. I hope I'll be able to sometime soon. :)

Steph