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sunnyday678

Fic: We Are Never, Ever, Ever Getting Back Together

Feb 16, 2013 14:08

Fic: We Are Never, Ever, Ever Getting Back Together

Word Count: ~1,300

Characters: Ensemble, specifically: Leslie, Donna, Ron, Ann, Ben, and Jerry

Rating: PG

Timeline: Takes place after "I Am Leslie Knope"

Author's Note: Happy Belated Galentine's Day, sullen_aquarian! She had prompted "My prompt is a fic where the whole Parks Department reveals their worst ( Read more... )

Comments 16

sullen_aquarian February 16 2013, 20:02:42 UTC

Oh, I loved this! Thank you. Jerry dating Helen Mirren? That is genius. And the ending was sad, but we know how that story ends, so it's all good : ).

Donna especially was perfect. More Leslie and Donna on the show, please!

throwingpens February 17 2013, 04:43:28 UTC

Seriously. I cracked up at that part. OF COURSE Jerry would date Helen Mirren. And not knowing who she was.

sunnyday678 February 19 2013, 10:58:16 UTC

So, so, so glad you enjoyed it! Happy Galentine's Day!

spunkyar February 17 2013, 01:17:21 UTC

Awwww...this was sad but cute. Ron's story was too funny and I loled when Leslie's mom had to break up with her. I totally thought she meant his mother too. :)

sunnyday678 February 19 2013, 10:59:15 UTC

So glad you liked it!

throwingpens February 17 2013, 04:44:00 UTC

I really enjoyed this! Something about the Leslie-Donna dynamic and the sadness of the breakup stories (Poor Ron and the vegetarian...)

sunnyday678 February 19 2013, 11:11:44 UTC

Thanks so much!!

ryeloza February 17 2013, 06:25:25 UTC

This was so much fun to read. I thought your Ron voice, especially, was superb and I loved the twist with Jerry/Helen Mirren. That was absolutely brilliant. And then to switch from humor to angst at the end without it feeling forced...this was so very well done.

sunnyday678 February 19 2013, 11:00:50 UTC

Thanks for such a sweet comment! So glad you liked it!

dashakay February 17 2013, 17:34:25 UTC

That was pretty much perfection!

I especially enjoyed:

Donna: "Well I've never been broken up with -- and certainly not like that. I took one guy’s credit card, bought myself two dozen roses with it, and told him they were from a much hotter guy and that I’d see him next lifetime."

Leslie: "Donna! That's credit card fraud!"

Donna: "Girl, please. The boy had to go, and Mama needed rose petals for her bath."

Serious belly laughs! Loved your Ron, too!

sunnyday678 February 19 2013, 11:09:16 UTC

Thank you so much! It was lots of fun to write, so I'm glad it was fun to read!