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Fic: The Sounds of Home 1/1 PG SGA

Jun 12, 2010 19:45

Title: The Sounds of Home
Author: Sunnyd_lite
Fandom: SGA
Set: During 3.10 The Return
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit.
Summary: John just can't let go.
Word Count: 520
Prompt: tamingthemuse #203 Crumpled Papers

( The alarm sounded through out the base )

sheppard, sga, mckay, tamingthemuse

Comments 4

enigmaticblues June 13 2010, 02:26:53 UTC

Oh, I really liked this. You caught the sense of displacement really well.

sunnyd_lite June 13 2010, 12:27:35 UTC

Yup I thought they really did treat the Atlantis types shabbily when they were forced back to home *grin*

Thanks for reading and commenting.

artemis_prime June 13 2010, 03:02:26 UTC

Very nice. I liked that Sheppard still thinks about turning things off with his mind even after a month. And then there's Rodney with his daily (?) phone calls just to make John's day.

sunnyd_lite June 13 2010, 12:29:15 UTC

After a couple of years on Atlantis, I figure the lack of mental commands would always bring him up short.

Given his lack of surprise at who was on the phone, I'd say daily was very possible *wink*

Thanks for reading and commenting! Glad I got it right