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Fic - Chloroform Kiss

Jul 29, 2009 11:59

Title: Chloroform Kiss
Pairing: Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres
Rating: R/NC-17
Disclaimer: Untrue. If you have evidence to testify otherwise, I'd LOVE to see it.
Summary: Sergio says it won’t happen again but when Nando shows up at his doorstep, his willpower is shoved aside.

( He's become a shell of himself, unable to function. )

fic, sernando

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sunlight_dust July 30 2009, 05:40:05 UTC

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♥

adorerdollylux July 30 2009, 01:33:07 UTC

ohmygod woman. this is fucking gorgeous. oh sergio. it's so beautiful seeing him be the vulnerable one, and in the specific way you made him so. i love it. thank you. <3

sunlight_dust July 30 2009, 05:43:00 UTC

You're amazingly sweet. <3

titania_torres July 30 2009, 02:06:27 UTC

aww why did he have to leave... he should have stayed....
this was wonderful, how sergio knows he's being used and the abuse of it al and still not being able to turn away. we can't control who we love.... our heart chooses that, for better or worse
great piece dear, love to have you writing more!

sunlight_dust July 30 2009, 05:51:32 UTC

Honestly, I struggled with the end because I wasn't sure if I wanted it to be that bittersweet or wholesome ending. I chose the former only because it's the way it played out in my head.
Exactly.
Thank you so much! ♥

robbie96 July 30 2009, 02:31:57 UTC

Ugh!

The angst, the pain ....

This was something .... Sergio *hugs* .... Brilliant writing :D

sunlight_dust July 30 2009, 05:55:02 UTC

Oh, the emotional battles of the heart. *sigh*

Thanks for the comment. :]

winter_solstice July 30 2009, 13:38:48 UTC

that was just heartbreaking.