Fic - Chloroform Kiss

[sunlight_dust]

Title: Chloroform Kiss
Pairing: Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres
Rating: R/NC-17
Disclaimer: Untrue. If you have evidence to testify otherwise, I'd LOVE to see it.
Summary: Sergio says it won’t happen again but when Nando shows up at his doorstep, his willpower is shoved aside.

Comments

[dance_fairies]

omg *flail* you wrote something
and
*flail*
I commented!
Okay going to read :D <3

[dance_fairies]

squeeeeeeeeeee
I've missed Sernando (and lj) so much!
And this was lovely! Even if I did slightly hate Nando for leaving poor old Sergio there! :O
Sergio can't help feeling silently devastated when he wakes up alone.
*wails*

Sergio has to wonder how long he's been practicing saying that.
Hehehe I can just imagine Nando pacing about, going over and over it :P

Sergio feels Nando's warm body press against his, and it's the most amazing thing he could possibly want.
awww awww aww ♥
love it :D

[sunlight_dust]

AND WE'VE MISSED YOU.
*clings*
D: do not hate Nando!!! He is confused.
:[

♥
ILY EMMA!!
*steals you from your boy*
Is he still away?

[dance_fairies]

But I've missed you guys more :D
*clings back*
I don't hate him! Not really, I couldn't...I mean...it's Nando...and Sergio! *huggles*

♥ ♥
ILY TOO!
:( Yes he is, until early sept I think.
So I'm all yours till then :D

[lovinthelads]

oh! Sergio, lovely, sweet Sergio!

Nando! How could you do this to him! Don't you dare leave him there again, you bastard!

sorry.

I worry.

X

(amazing, btw)

[sunlight_dust]

Haha aww, they have a complicated relationship. <3

Thanks so much for reading and the comment.

♥

[being_georgia]

Wow, it's beautiful. I really like Fer here, very realistic.
"whispers incoherently about how Nando's the only one he sees, and he must have been blind before he met him, because he can't remember anything before him." Beautiful lines.
Very good title, by the way.

[sunlight_dust]

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and the comment. :]

[dfotw]

Mmmm, this sounds familiar for some reason (maybe I've read a previous version?), but in any case it's lovely and mature and miles more mature than most the Sernando fics out there, so well done and thank you for sharing this with us!

[sunlight_dust]

Well, I wouldn't doubt that you've read something similar to this; it's not exactly original in my opinion.
Anyways, thanks for the comment! :]

[_woody_lein]

Ooops, that was hot!:o

But I feel sorry for Nando-addict Sergio.:(

"I don't know what happened before, but I know what I want now, and I know where I want to be... And it's not outside your house wondering whether or not you'll kick me out if I knock."

*wow* What a speech...

What can I say? Well written, but I don't like it that Sergio has no chance for a relationship, maybe he should go to Iker.;)

Thank you for sharing hun.*hugs*

[sunlight_dust]

;D

aww I know. Poor Sergio. :/

Well written, but I don't like it that Sergio has no chance for a relationship, maybe he should go to Iker.;)

D:
not in MY fantasy world he shouldn't! LOL.

Glad you liked it. :]

[_woody_lein]

not in MY fantasy world he shouldn't! LOL.

I know, but I have still hope that you will change your mind.;)
And I want a happy Sergio. :)

[sunlight_dust]

hahah Cesc and Nando would not be happy with me.

I'm actually writing another fic. It's going to be a multichaptered one (definitely not as long as Doki Doki though) but I'm still plotting everything out so it'll take me a while before I post it.