Awkward

Oct 19, 2011 23:52

Title: Awkward
Rating: G or PG? (not sure >.<)
Couples: Kyusung - Kyuhyun/Yesung ~
Genre: I don’t know, romance? o.o
Word count: around 4700? ._.
Summary: Yesung starts to act awkwardly around Kyuhyun, what happens when the magnae notices?
Author note: My first ever Kyusung-fic *-* (Please tell me what you think? (a ( Read more... )

group: super junior, character: kyuhyun, pairing: kyusung/yekyu, character: yesung

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sujulovenl October 19 2011, 21:57:28 UTC
*huggles* *pokes* *steals first spot on your first KyuSung fic*

MINEEE :3 I'll give a proper moment later, as I am about to fall asleep here:P (no, not because of your fic xD)

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sujulovenl October 27 2011, 22:00:26 UTC
I totally should be murdered for not reacting on this earlier ;.; I am soooo sorry!

I read this fanfic like.. 10 times now, unbeta'ed and halfly beta'ed and completely beta'ed and posted on LJ ㅋ I can dream this one ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Well you kinda halfly know what I think of this fic ㅋ But let me tell you that I LOVE how you described everyone in here! Donghae as the bouncing little cute dude XD Eunhyuk as the.. well.. Donghae-follower, with scary eyes ㅋ Leeteuk as the real Hyung, Heechul as the bad Hyung (not keeping his promise >.> But still so cute and helpfull xD I love Heechul hereXD!), Kyuhyun as the dummy (oblivious dewdd) and Yesung as shy little fella XD

And even though I just crowned your other fic as your best one this far, this one sure is awesome aswel! And I did briefly re-read it just now, and I kinda actualy really love this one too xD Maybe the 2 fics should just share a best-fic-this-far seat D:

Scenes so well written *-* You are so much improving, like I told you before. Never stop writing you, keep em coming <3

(you ( ... )

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sungieobsessed October 27 2011, 22:36:19 UTC
I've said it so many times, no dying! D:< (;_;)
and yeah, you've read this a few times xD but seriously, it would be awesome if you dreamed it! a Kyusung-dream *-* (I dreamed about Leeteuk and Eunhyuk the other day, but that's not really the same xD)

and thank you so much! ~ it means alot ;_; I just kinda write them as I imagine them, and what I would do if I were them xD I can't help but to write Donghae like that, all childish and hyper and obvious (I would've so acted like that if I'd been Donghae ... -.-') and I love writing Heechul, all snarky and evil and secretly helpful and stuff xD (but he wasn't (only) the bad hyung, he gave Leeteuk coffee, remember? D; ) Yesung turned out that way 'cause that's what I would do it that situation, and that made it kinda hard to write it any other way xD

and cool that 2/3 of my fics are both my best xD need to write more so you'll have a harder time deciding >:D .. (a) but really, thanks again <3 ( ... )

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cynder8 October 20 2011, 06:54:51 UTC
aww! so cute! nervous yesung - he kept running away from kyu. lol! damn, clueless kyu too. good thing heechul filled him in. :D ending was adorable too!

i remember reading ur 1st fic - it was great! i think i commented on it too, but i just checked and the comment isn't there anymore. how weird!! :0

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sungieobsessed October 20 2011, 21:20:20 UTC
I would've run away from Kyu if I were Yesung too xD and what would Kyuhyun (*cough*Suju*cough*) do without Heechul? xD <3
thank you so much for reading and commenting <3 (and maybe LJ ate your comment? o.o >.<)

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blackshinytsuki October 22 2011, 21:02:13 UTC
Haaaaaaw, Helene ♥ it was amazing !
So this is the surprise you've talked about for 2 months, right ? :P Thank you so much ! ♥
The end was so cute ! But Kyuhyun is so evil (just like Bianca hahaha XD).
And btw, I want more KangTeuk in your next fic !! XD Hahaha just kidding, don't worry, it was really good. ♥
Thank you for writing it. I feel really touched that you dedicated it to me ! ♥

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sungieobsessed October 22 2011, 22:39:02 UTC
yeah, it was supposed to be the surprise-fic-thing >-< (I'm too slow, seriously ;_; )
and Kyuhyun really was evil ... I actually weren't planning on making him that bad, but it just kinda ended up that way xD (the ending was supposed to be really cute and sweet and stuff but it just wouldn't turn out that way D: )
Kangteuk is not unlikely, it's just kinda hard to do when Kangin isn't really in the fic ... xD
and thanks to you for making me able to write it, hope it didn't disappoint you >_< <3

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chicca_jinju October 23 2011, 00:08:40 UTC
I have to comment here as well.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. oMOOO
HOW CAN HE BE SO CUTE >_< .
But I really want to know what happened in that room XD...OMG I love our DevilKyu

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sungieobsessed October 29 2011, 14:31:15 UTC
xD
thank you ~ <3

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ayu_mi_chan November 2 2011, 19:36:08 UTC
*AyumiFey here!! <3*

ADSAGDAGFHGH Just gonna say that I already read it some time ago and I loved it!! But I didn't leave a comment back then. Now making up for this mistake!! When I saw the first sentences I knew I read it before!!

I LOVE the shy Yesung here XD so cute and adorable. Lol at Kyuhyun being so oblivious. Really, how could you not notice something like that :3 Good that he finally realised that (with some help) and took action! Which just led to some nice KyuSung action :>

And what you said was false! You write so well. I love the way you write, it's amazing. It's so easy and enjoyable to read. Gonna see more fics from you from now on XD

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sungieobsessed November 2 2011, 20:21:57 UTC
really? You've already read it? so much for a new Kyusung-fic then xD

but thank you! <3 (and just so you know, there's a 90% chance I would've acted like Kyuhyun did if it was me ... same with Yesung, actually xD)

and thank you so much, really! it means a lot when you say that, I honestly think my writing aren't that good, but when I get comments like yours, I really want to write more *o*

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ayu_mi_chan November 3 2011, 18:34:44 UTC
Yep, I did. I think just as you posted it here haha XD hunting KyuSung fics like crazy. (Also read your first story too, I realised. I think after reading this one I went to your journal and read the other one that was there hahah really good too! Gonna comment on that one too because suddenly I have much to say LOL (and your newest story too ;P ))

Don't worry, I would have acted like them too probably. I'm a very shy person so yeah. And I'm sometimes very oblivious when it comes to things like that when they concern me, but not when someone else for some reason lol =v= well maybe my non-existent love life makes me oblivious to things like that xD

That's good!! Because you're a really good writer and with practice I know you can become even better. And I'm happy because there's one more great writer out there that I can stalk <3

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sungieobsessed November 3 2011, 18:43:08 UTC
oh, okay xD I just think it's seriously awesome that people actually read what I write *-*

and I would have acted like Yesung, absolutely sure, but I'm pretty sure I would have asked someone earlier if I were Kyu ... XD (and some there -.-' xD)

it sounds very wrong, but I seriously can't describe how happy I am to actually have a stalker! \*O*/
and again, really thank you so much >-< I will do my best xD ^-^ <3

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ayu_mi_chan November 3 2011, 18:53:45 UTC
Many people do, I'm sure that many of them don't comment too ^^

Same here. I definitely wouldn't take any action so soon like Kyuhyun XD Nope, never. Too shy and awkward and all that. >____>

Haha it's so nice to have stalkers on the internet <3 (well in most cases) though i suppose i will never have any as i seem to be very good at hiding from everyone~ XD Will be waiting for more from you. <3

*adsadga such cute Yesung icon *___* *

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