Awkward

[sungieobsessed]

Title: Awkward
Rating: G or PG? (not sure >.<)
Couples: Kyusung - Kyuhyun/Yesung ~
Genre: I don’t know, romance? o.o
Word count: around 4700? ._.
Summary: Yesung starts to act awkwardly around Kyuhyun, what happens when the magnae notices?
Author note: My first ever Kyusung-fic *-* (Please tell me what you think? (a

Comments

[sujulovenl]

I totally should be murdered for not reacting on this earlier ;.; I am soooo sorry!

I read this fanfic like.. 10 times now, unbeta'ed and halfly beta'ed and completely beta'ed and posted on LJ ㅋ I can dream this one ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Well you kinda halfly know what I think of this fic ㅋ But let me tell you that I LOVE how you described everyone in here! Donghae as the bouncing little cute dude XD Eunhyuk as the.. well.. Donghae-follower, with scary eyes ㅋ Leeteuk as the real Hyung, Heechul as the bad Hyung (not keeping his promise >.> But still so cute and helpfull xD I love Heechul hereXD!), Kyuhyun as the dummy (oblivious dewdd) and Yesung as shy little fella XD

And even though I just crowned your other fic as your best one this far, this one sure is awesome aswel! And I did briefly re-read it just now, and I kinda actualy really love this one too xD Maybe the 2 fics should just share a best-fic-this-far seat D:

Scenes so well written *-* You are so much improving, like I told you before. Never stop writing you, keep em coming <3

(you know why ;> ㅋ)

Loveyouuuu ^-^

[sungieobsessed]

I've said it so many times, no dying! D:< (;_;)
and yeah, you've read this a few times xD but seriously, it would be awesome if you dreamed it! a Kyusung-dream *-* (I dreamed about Leeteuk and Eunhyuk the other day, but that's not really the same xD)

and thank you so much! ~ it means alot ;_; I just kinda write them as I imagine them, and what I would do if I were them xD I can't help but to write Donghae like that, all childish and hyper and obvious (I would've so acted like that if I'd been Donghae ... -.-') and I love writing Heechul, all snarky and evil and secretly helpful and stuff xD (but he wasn't (only) the bad hyung, he gave Leeteuk coffee, remember? D; ) Yesung turned out that way 'cause that's what I would do it that situation, and that made it kinda hard to write it any other way xD

and cool that 2/3 of my fics are both my best xD need to write more so you'll have a harder time deciding >:D .. (a) but really, thanks again <3

the fourth(? xD) thank yooouuu ~ don't feel like I'm improving at all (in the contrary, actually >.<) so that too means a lot ... xD

love you too, like REALLY looooooooooooveeeeeeeeeeeeeee you! ♥♥♥ :*