Practice Makes Perfect, ch 13

[sung_gi]

Title: Practice makes perfect, chapter 13
Paring: Haehyuk, side Teukchul and Sibum
Rating: PG ~ NC-17 (R for this chapter)
Warning: betaed by myself, which is the same as unbetaed
Word count: 3815
Summary: Donghae sees Eunhyuk at school for the first time when they have to do a presentation in biology together. He has never seen him before even though

Comments

[em_nanae]

damn I'm late for.. a month. >.<
I don't get it, I've tried to stalk your LJ to see if you updated. YO-kokeet vaa tais tulla tielle ja sit en muistanu stalkata enää -.- no, oon nyt täällä 8DD

wow it was a long chapter. So Hyuk has issues with his self-confidence? :/ Donghae should've said something about his feelings towards Hyuk. That story of Hyuk getting beaten up was horrible. Random dudes just appear and start beating you up. And for what?

And Soo Man... he's a bastard. How can he beat Hae? On one hand I'm glad that Hae's mom came to rescue and saw that Soo Man is really a monster, but on the other hand it's so horrible for her to watch her son getting beaten up by her ex. the scene was well written.

I can't wait to read more ^^
ja joo sori ku oon näin myöhässä ;___;

[sung_gi]

*haha* Better late than never, right

[em_nanae]

enkku lähti takuuvarmana E:nä ja tuli takas L <33333 olin ihan über-onnellinen ku avasin sen kuoren ja ohmaigawd enkusta L. olin nimittäi varma et meen uusii sen ku en saanu L mut sit YTL nosti mun pisteitä yli 10 pisteellä ja sain yli L rajan. :'D i'm soo happy ^^ ja sit kirjotin terveystiedon ja psykan, molemmista M eli mentii yli tavoitteiden niissä :DD oon erittäin tyytyväinen tuloksiin :D
en muute ees tiiä minkä ikäin oot, :'D oliks sulla YO:t täs kans?

yay no spoilers xD
I haven't experienced getting beaten up either, but I think it was written well.

YAYYYYYYYYY FOR DA NEXT CHAPTERR!! \^.^/
mulla koeviikko alkamas, ja se menee kyl kaikkee muuhun ku opiskeluun :'D mut yritähä opiskella, kyl me jaksetaa oottaa viel...
ärsyttää ku on välil jotai hyviä ideoita ficciin, mut sit ku yrittää oikeesti kirjottaa jotai ni tuntuu ettei siit tuu mtn -.-"

THANKS FOR WRITING THIS BB <33

[sung_gi]

OMN! Onnea!!! :DDDD Tosi hyvin!!^^
...vaikkei mulla suuremmin oo hajua noista kirjotuksista XD Lukion ekalla ku vasta oon, eli 16v ;)) Pre-IB on jännä asia :DDD

Thanks, once again^^ I don't get compliments about my style of writing that often :D Makes me really happy ^^

Joo siis mun piti tosiaan lukee tänään matikkaa.... (pitkä matikka ja mie kuolen)... mut jotenki päädyin kirjottaan yli 800 sanaa uuten chapteriin ja sit mie aloin jostain kumman syystä värkkään tän ficin sellaseen muotoon et se on ku kirja, et jos mie joskus vaikka printtaisin tän tai jotain ;))

I'm happy you like it!! <33

[sung_gi]

*haha* You have no idea how much your comment amazed me! New readers are always welcome^^

YES! He's gone! ...at least for now ;))) I'm not gonna spoil anything :DD

The next chapter is on its way^^ I'm trying to get it finished and sent to my beta before Christmas :D

Thank you for reading and commenting^^

[ambiiii]

Hai~ are you going to update this soon? I'm constantly checking for updates^^

[sung_gi]

Yes, I am! The next chapter is being betaed now and I hope she'll get it betaed soon so that I could update this :D
I'm so sorry it's been illegally long while since I updated!
But I'll be updating soon :) I'm glad I still have readers for this fic ^^