[fic] VF: Blade's Edge

Nov 13, 2012 17:27

Title: Blade's Edge ( Read more... )

angst, takaba, kirishima, asami

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eprime November 13 2012, 22:57:41 UTC
Your Asamis always make me want to know more about his background and what made him that way. *shudders* Deliciously dark and chilling. I'm glad he saw how Kirishima meant to help him and thought of their relationship as being like a friendship. I hope Akihito can keep him grounded.

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sunflower1343 November 14 2012, 01:02:44 UTC
Thanks. My Asamis do have varied backgrounds since his personality can play out so many different ways. I thought about him here quite a bit. He is quite scary in this one, akin to some psychiatrists or scientists I've known. I did pull on the novelization for him this time, as I tend to do when I want a slightly psycho version of him.

But he begins and ends with Akihito, so for me he will always remain grounded (so long as Akihito is in the fic^^).

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angelicazefiro November 13 2012, 23:07:28 UTC
Oh my g..! And that last sentence, 'finally warm' actually opens up the real gulfs, the ones leading to the whys of asami himself. Possibly. Perhaps. I feel quite shaken, thank you, I'm glad it was the revised version

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sunflower1343 November 14 2012, 01:04:48 UTC
^__^ Thanks. I thought quite a bit on how to end it, and it had to be with that phrase.

Yeah the uncut version was bad. I was getting nauseous letting it play out the way it had to.

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kyouruhi24 November 13 2012, 23:11:53 UTC
seeing a post from you is one of my guilty pleasures.. =) i just can;t resist clicking on the link and indulge myself.. lol ( ... )

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sunflower1343 November 14 2012, 01:24:28 UTC
Wow, thank you. My fic isn't worthy of such a comment LOL ( ... )

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ca11iope November 13 2012, 23:17:49 UTC
That was - terrifying. I kind of glad I missed the original post, and a the same time I almost wish I'd seen it. Asami is one scary individual, and this version was definitely enough to chill me through to the bone. Thank you so much for the hopeful ending. It tempers the blow.

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sunflower1343 November 14 2012, 01:08:28 UTC
Thanks. I had to end it that way, just because I couldn't dealt with something so bleak after writing the original. I didn't actually post the original. I was writing it and was about two thirds of the way through and I was getting physically ill and very upset for the nameless victim. I just had to stop.

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nbsiren November 13 2012, 23:35:00 UTC
Many cheers for this~ Dark but it lightens ^^

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sunflower1343 November 14 2012, 01:10:33 UTC
Thank you. I don't often like to do fics where it doesn't lighten at the end. I just prefer that something that looks up. :)

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