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sunflower1343

[fic] VF AU: Moving On

Feb 01, 2007 20:29

Title: Moving On
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: up to NT10
Warnings: AU, takes place the night after NT 10, which I conveniently made the eighth anniversary of when Asami was last in town.

It would be nice if it could happen, so I'm giving it to Feilong for his birthday. :)

( Moving On )

asami, feilong

Comments 52

doitwell February 2 2007, 02:58:13 UTC

When I see your name as writer, I know I'm in for a treat-this was no exception. I love the way you feature them both realizing that they have indeed changed over the years. And as hinted to in the actual story, Asami had better watch it,Takaba has developed a soft spot for FeiLong. I like the way you have FeiLong sticking Asami's nose in that idea and Asami firing right back. These two are such a pair aren't they!

sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 03:33:56 UTC

Thank you so much. :) I don't see either of them winning, except through compromise, and it will take a little growing up for both of them. I'm hoping the last part of the NT arc gives them that. I just pushed it. XD

pugsley February 2 2007, 03:04:17 UTC

*throws confetti* *wipes a tear* Tears for Fei Long and all he has gone through but happiness for him for "finally" continuing on with his life and not living in the past and especially for telling Asami that he does not care any more about him or the past!!

What a great story and a wonderful tribute for our Lovely Dragon's Birthday!! And I too, wish that he would really do these things!! I especially enjoyed the part where he told Asami about what he told Akihito, about staying with him!! I am a Asami and Akihito girl but a big part of me would like to see Akihito loved by and stay with Fei Long!! *hee hee* *runs from asami's henchmen*

*hugs* and thank you because you have given me the idea for next week's theme for club_sion's "Fei Long's Birthday Month" activity!!

sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 03:31:27 UTC

And you gave me the idea for the sad little thing I just posted at Sion. Dammit, I made myself cry over it. Next week's theme better be happier! ;P

But at least I can come back to this one and see him smile.

Thanks for celebrating his birthday there. I like to see him remembered. *hugs*

pugsley February 2 2007, 03:58:15 UTC

I am glad that you warned me that your latest story was sad, but I did not know how sad it was going to be!! *still wiping tears* Poor little baby Fei Long and mean old Yan but you are right we have this one to read when the sadness from your Mommy story gets to us!!

But both of them are wonderful in their own special way and you really are a phenomenal writer to bring out such emotion in two completely different stories about Fei Long!! Thank You!!

I, too, am glad that Fei Long is remembered!! Yamane Ayano created such a beautiful, elegant and wonderful character when she made the Lovely Dragon ~ Fei Long and above all else she made him Sexy as Hell!! *hee hee*

pugsley February 2 2007, 04:00:07 UTC

Next week's theme better be happier!
~ Oh BTW next week's Theme will be much happier, I promise!!

chiebaka February 2 2007, 03:44:14 UTC

Yay! I like this! The humor is just about right. It does seem from the last VF chapter that Fei is beginning to see a way out of his grudge.

sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 20:57:32 UTC

Thank you. I think he is too. I made it happen a little sooner though, since it's his birthday and all. :)

mtarashidango February 2 2007, 04:34:04 UTC

That was awesome :) I love how you've shown that Fei has gotten so much stronger emotionally - and that he can hold his own against Asami.

"Yes, you are, and that threw me. Until I realized that it wasn't for him that you came, but for your pride."

"You're just mad because it's true. That's alright. I won't tell your secret. For now."<.i>

Oooh~! That would be so awesome, if Fei was the one to make Asami finally spit out what he's really feeling about all this and get rid of the facade of ultimate pride. *evil grin*

"But I'm tired of the man's dour face. He never smiles."
Poor Yoh ;_; Maybe if Fei-sama smiles more, he'll smile back :)

Maybe I'll jump Yoh. It would be interesting to see if he had more than one facial expression. Bwahahaha XDD OMG...I love your Fei and his sarcastic cracks - jump him, jump him!! (I almost wrote "hump him"... Nooooo~! Yoh can't be uke XDDD ( ... )

sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 21:05:31 UTC

Thanks! :)

I think Fei might jump Yoh. But I still find Yoh jumping Fei sexier. Yoh just seems like a top to me. But as an uke, he's quite amusing.

I wanted Fei here, and want him in the manga, to be free of Asami and his past, and I'm hoping that a friendship with Akihito will aid him in this. This is what I want most for him, and hope it comes true.

I'm very glad you liked this. :) For some reason, I've been able to finish things the last couple of days. XD

among_the_happy February 2 2007, 06:05:40 UTC

You know. I saw your name, and I knew I had to click. Here I was, half asleep as I began to read. However, a few lines later, I am awake and sucked into the world you created.

I really found that short little story so refreshing. I loved it. I really liked that Asami realized Fei did feel nothing for him, but now wanted Aki-kun.

That was so good.Oh man, if only it did happen this way. As opposed to you know what >_< Poor Aki. Sigh.

Thank you so much. Happy Bday Fei-sexy-ass-sama.

sunflower1343 February 2 2007, 21:08:58 UTC

Oh *blush* thank you very much. I hope I don't disappoint you too often. But I'm happy that you enjoyed this one. Something like this is my biggest wish for Feilong. I'm just not very hopeful that's what will happen in the manga, but you never know.

Happy Bday Fei-sexy-ass-sama.

*laughs* That's the best bday greeting I've seen all day!