Comments | sundaymess: when innocence still enveloped us.

sundaymess

when innocence still enveloped us.

Jul 04, 2012 19:06

Fandom: Naruto
Characters: Uchiha Sasuke & Haruno Sakura
Prompts: 17. he told me many times "i love you" & 54. leap of faith & 10. heatwave & 20. laughter
Word Count: 409
Rating: PG13
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.
Warning: AU.
Notes: Written for 31_days & 500themes & mission_insane & lover100.

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( Theirs was an innocent, young love, but it holds as strong as any other. ♥ )

character: uchiha sasuke, genre: young love, 101-500 words, mission insane, 500 themes, lover100, character: haruno sakura, pairing: sasuke/sakura, fandom: naruto

Comments 2

shmooisanut July 31 2012, 08:30:30 UTC

That last bit through me off. Ah, six so young, innocent and already giving love confessions. For the first six paragraphs I was under the impression that the characters were much older and I was very happy with those thoughts. Them being naked just disturbed me so I imagined them with clothes on just to keep my mind at peace. Now I'm like -What??-naked-6yr old-confessions-hugging- a bit cute but it's not painting a pretty picture in my head.

sundaymess July 31 2012, 13:58:45 UTC

Sorry for the confusion. I meant 'bare naked' emotionally, not physically. That would be entirely awkward, two naked six year olds sitting in some meadow in the sun together. Thanks for the comment!