This was a good beginning :) I LOVE Kyu and Sungmin's relationship and Min's teasing. Kyu should've sang tho :/ i guess he might in the next chapter rite? hope so......
I spied this earlier and bookmarked so that I could read it when I took a break from writing. You're only two chapters in and I'm already loving how you wrote Kyuhyun. His friendship with Sungmin is the best, and had me chuckling whilst I read along. Not to mention how well you've made Eunhyuk's and Donghae's friendship appear. I also spy Hyohyuk. You better give me Hyohyuk.
:x Thank you~ I wanted to keep them in character as much as possible and I see teen!Kyu as a shy, inwardly snarky guy with little reason to smile as of right now. (When Donghae comes into the picture, though...)
I didn't want to alter any relationships, and I've found that Donghae/Eunhyuk had the best (nine years of friendship and whatnot) and Kyuhyun and Sungmin were just an evil pair. omai, how did you find that, I thought I hid it well
Sadly, I'm still in the process of coming up with a summary ;-; I just don't know how to put all of what I believe to be a huge story (in the future) into a few lines...Dx
Aw, thanks unnie :x I don't write fast, sadly, because of school, but I hope to get most of it done on the weekend.
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Hmm, maybe~
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He's also a very snarky maknae >.
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Oh, question! Do you have a summary of the story?
Anyway, I'll be waiting for more ^^
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I didn't want to alter any relationships, and I've found that Donghae/Eunhyuk had the best (nine years of friendship and whatnot) and Kyuhyun and Sungmin were just an evil pair. omai, how did you find that, I thought I hid it well
Sadly, I'm still in the process of coming up with a summary ;-; I just don't know how to put all of what I believe to be a huge story (in the future) into a few lines...Dx
Aw, thanks unnie :x I don't write fast, sadly, because of school, but I hope to get most of it done on the weekend.
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