Thank you so much for reading and all the wonderful comments along the way!
Yeah, they aren't ready to take that step. And, like you said, who knows if they ever will need to. Their commitment level to each other is very different from the average person's.
I am thrilled that you thought so highly of the story. Once again, thank you!
I was looking forward to your day and could not wait for you to post your story. All I can say is that you did not disappoint! Well done and thank you. :-)
Thank you! It was my first time really diving into action/adventure and took me a bit outside my comfort zone, but I had a lot of fun with it. I'm glad it worked out the way I wanted it to. :)
" . . . he carried his suit jacket casually over his shoulder, his waistcoat open, his tie loosened, and the top two buttons of his shirt unbuttoned. He’d even rolled up his shirt sleeves"
^^^Okay - where do I send the bill for the drool-cleaning for the above?
Elevator scene - always fun, I especially like Buffy pulling him in by the waistcoat (sigh, modern men's fashion totally underestimates the sexiness of a waistcoat).
Undressing scenes - sigh, nothing like a good clothing removal scene (especially when younger sisters find the results later)
Lovemaking scene - very sweet and loving, I think they're gonna make it.
Giles finally deciding that a Watcher's place is with his Slayer and the Council can be damned, er, survive without him - Happy Happy Joy Joy
Tornadoes and power outages and uncooperative computers notwithstanding - this was a fine story and a fun read! Thanks for seeing it through and sharing with us!!
I'm glad you liked it! And yeah, I think in the end I powered through because of the obstacles. Damned tornadoes, power outages, and hardware failures... oh my! :)
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They need time as a couple before deciding whether to make the ultimate commitment.
Which they may not; nothing says they have to be married.
Absolutely love this story.
Your writing style is great.
You paint very vivid scenes and the voices of the characters stays true to what we know.
Thank you for sharing your creativity.
T. Dunn
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Yeah, they aren't ready to take that step. And, like you said, who knows if they ever will need to. Their commitment level to each other is very different from the average person's.
I am thrilled that you thought so highly of the story. Once again, thank you!
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Thank you! It was my first time really diving into action/adventure and took me a bit outside my comfort zone, but I had a lot of fun with it. I'm glad it worked out the way I wanted it to. :)
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^^^Okay - where do I send the bill for the drool-cleaning for the above?
Elevator scene - always fun, I especially like Buffy pulling him in by the waistcoat (sigh, modern men's fashion totally underestimates the sexiness of a waistcoat).
Undressing scenes - sigh, nothing like a good clothing removal scene (especially when younger sisters find the results later)
Lovemaking scene - very sweet and loving, I think they're gonna make it.
Giles finally deciding that a Watcher's place is with his Slayer and the Council can be damned, er, survive without him - Happy Happy Joy Joy
Tornadoes and power outages and uncooperative computers notwithstanding - this was a fine story and a fun read! Thanks for seeing it through and sharing with us!!
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I'm glad you liked it! And yeah, I think in the end I powered through because of the obstacles. Damned tornadoes, power outages, and hardware failures... oh my! :)
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