SH 2015: In a Morning (for tarofroyo)

May 13, 2015 08:54

For: tarofroyo
From: ANONYMOUS until May 22, 2015

Title: In a Morning
Rating: R (for a bit of foul language)
Pairing(s)/Focus: Suho/Kai
Length: 1,941 words
Summary: Joonmyun's mornings make him build a life without halt, until it all crumbles in an evening.
Warning/s: Swearing.

Notes: ohhhhh i have been writing for so much time, but every time feels like ( Read more... )

with: kai, 2015: submissions

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misszhangyixing May 13 2015, 02:19:19 UTC
I cried. Tears fell when i got to the ending.

I was so so sure they won't end up together, and it's such a shame for their relationship to end because it was so beautiful and I really felt their love. It was not an easy relationship but goodness they're perfect for each other!

But then...the ending. It's merely a sentence but it really got me. An ache in my heart. They're together so all is well /cries

Oh wow. Wow. This is brilliant.
One of the best that I have ever read. I was reading poetry. That's how good it was.

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gingerdae May 25 2015, 19:55:24 UTC
I am so happy you liked it!! Like, totally, so happy ;;;;v;;; Thank you very much for reading this! And I'm sorry you cried ;;;;; Now smile a lot, kay? ;;u;; Thank you so much, again. You have no idea how your comment made me happy ;;nn;; ♥♥♥

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tarofroyo May 13 2015, 10:31:57 UTC
Thank you for this gift fic! I don’t often read angsty fics but maybe I should more, because I loved this! I like that you took the serious/realistic route with the prompt. That you set this story in s. korea with kai as an exo member reminded me of the characters’ rl counterparts and how hard it is to live in the public eye. If only suho + kai in this story could live an undisturbed romance… but the real world says otherwise, when both characters’ careers are built on public opinion =(. Even with the angst, suho and kai are SO sweet together in this story. It’s amazing how one meeting (A+ to kai for taking initiative) grew into so much more and they became so important to each other <3. And heh heh “mr. kim” dirty texting the nation’s idol in the right before an official interview =P YES. I really felt for both characters through your writing, and I was relieved when they got together in the end =’D they are too precious to be heartbroken T_T though of course whichever road they go down--love vs. career--is not without its large ( ... )

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gingerdae May 25 2015, 19:57:14 UTC
Hi, hi, hi! Thank you for this! The comment and the prompts and everything! I enjoyed it so much and I really was a bit shaky at first, I didn't think it was good enough. But, thankfully, you liked it, so it's ok ;;;u;;;! Thank you so much!! ♥♥

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tiny_estrella May 13 2015, 18:00:15 UTC
oh my god i cant even capslock my heart's so ;A; this fic was beautiful and perfect and sososo heartbreaking in all the right ways it was just so easy to imagine cuz it was soooooo realistic meanie netizens trying to keep the sukai apart ;;;;;;;;;;;;
and the ending
the ennnnnnnnndinnnnnnnngggg
one sentence left me on the floor crying into my pillow cuz sukaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii they got their happiness and it was ;w;
ty so much for this awesome fic <3333333

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gingerdae May 25 2015, 19:58:58 UTC
Oh my, no need to capslock, I got you ;;;;;a;;;;. I'm sorry for the tears, I'll get you a body pillow of your bias, how does that sound ////u//// Thank you so much for reading it!! ♥

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yuraxchan May 13 2015, 23:57:01 UTC
I thought I would cry...but no, thank you so much for the happy end \o/
It was kind of heartbreaking, but i loved it.

Btw when they sexted...that was so damn hot ;u;

Thank you <3

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gingerdae May 25 2015, 20:00:25 UTC
sexTS ARE AWESOME I LUV THEM SDFGHJKL I somehow end up using this in most of my fics, I should stop hahahaaaa :'D. Thank you for reading! ♥

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shinealightrose May 14 2015, 02:07:30 UTC
Ugh! This tears me up! Just the little snippet that we see (and the in-between scenes we don't see). :((((
It's sad but realistic in that they only get a part of the life they want to have. Okay, now I'm going to go and mope, but seriously, thank you for writing this.

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gingerdae May 25 2015, 20:01:51 UTC
I hope you didn't mope ;;;a;;; Go eat something really tasty ///u///!! Thank you for reading and commenting! So much ♥♥

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