I Envy You

Dec 01, 2005 18:26

Title: I Envy You
Author: sugareey (aka ME)
Rating: pg-13
Pairing: H/D
Word Count: 2,150
Summary: words that have never been said...
Disclaimer: not mine. however, it is my duty to manipulate the characters.
Warning: post hbp. this is from the determination series
A/N: this is for the AWDT prompt cocoa butter body lotion for nocturnali and jamie2109. cheers ( Read more... )

my fics, pg-13, h/d

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yodels December 4 2005, 09:10:22 UTC
Great job. The complexities of their emotions, and their loyalties is nicely done here.

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sugareey December 4 2005, 10:29:05 UTC
thank you! *hugs* i originally would have not made a sequel...but i felt like this should be some type of series. even though it's canony...possibilties are endless. i kind of feel bad for both of them at this point. *pets harry and draco*

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jamie2109 December 4 2005, 15:27:06 UTC
Terrific! I love how they are so totally still themselves but you see a certain bond between them already. Developing wonderfully, keep going, I want tosee where this ends!!! *hugs*

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sugareey December 5 2005, 16:40:40 UTC
thank you dear! *hugs back*

there has to be some type of bond between them...they are definitely not like everyone else at hogwarts. and i'm deetermined to make this as canon as possible or kind of. mmmhmm.

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xpyromania05x December 6 2005, 15:50:59 UTC
yay.....me wuv ur fics...hehhe ^__^

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sugareey December 6 2005, 20:29:09 UTC
geez you finally read it! gahhh. it gets better i assure you.

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iluvshajalan December 7 2005, 01:05:20 UTC
Oh that was so amazing. It was just like reading one of JK's books, only gayer! Please continue, you must!

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sugareey December 7 2005, 09:33:48 UTC
thank you. i hope you can assume why these lovely young men will get together. *coughs*

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physixxx March 6 2006, 17:23:21 UTC
i loved this... i read the "i hate you" first... then realized it was a part of a set. i love it so far!

one thing:

“Sirius was Bellatrix’s cousin,” Harry replied forcefully. “They were a bit closer, weren’t they? Of course,” he said more quietly as he closed the door, “his will gave me the obligation over this place and…”

Bellatrix and Narcissa are sisters... that makes Draco's mom just as much a cousin as Bellatrix.

Just thought you might want to correct that before you archive it somewhere.

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