The Space Between (fic)

Aug 26, 2010 21:08

Title: The Space Between
Fandom: Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Peter/Olivia
Word Count: ~2800
Spoilers: Through the end of S2.
Summary: Post S2-finale fic. There's always something keeping them apart.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the fabulous show of Fringe. And the fact that the title shares the name of a song by the Dave Matthews Band is ( Read more... )

my fanfiction, fringe, olivia dunham, peter/olivia, peter bishop

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holycitygirl September 1 2010, 20:26:07 UTC
Well I finally have time to come and leave my feedback [yay!]. You are a great writer, darlin and I'm still so thrilled that we share an obsession again.

I love Peter in this, the fact that he's not really ready to forgive -but he still loves her [loves them]. It's very realistic. Angsty Peter is amazing.

And you referenced my favorite moment [the Greek!].

Love this and you. ♥ Happy to have played my part. Thank you!

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sugangel7 September 1 2010, 23:29:47 UTC
Thank you muchly, darling ( ... )

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sugangel7 September 6 2010, 06:03:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked. :)

And S3 is going to be painful for sure...I've been trying to avoid thinking about it these past couple weeks...

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tatka_sn September 10 2010, 07:13:07 UTC
Terrific story. Reread it maybe fifty times (no kidding).
There were a lot of lines I liked, most of them already praised.
The nearly heartbreaking use of “sweetheart” (of course, been said many times before me). And “It’s petty, but she’s never liked admitting that Nina Sharp is right…” And Peter’s “I failed you…” And “Walternate… made sure of a lot of things”.
Was mesmerized by “Nowhere is this more painfully clear than in the following fact” for reasons completely unconnected with Fringe - just liked… don’t know… sound? pace of it? and the thing that I can’t really say this short and clear in my own language?
And the resolution - that both of them know about the way things are now. They are on one page.

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sugangel7 September 10 2010, 15:16:48 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind words and letting me know what lines resonated for you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. :)

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ulkis January 27 2011, 04:23:34 UTC
This was great; the last couple of lines gave me the warm and fuzzies.

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sugangel7 January 27 2011, 05:32:16 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending! =)

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