What You See is What You Get (fic)

[sugangel7]

Title: What You See is What You Get
Fandom: Fringe
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Olivia, Walternate
Word Count: 158
Spoilers: "Over There" Parts 1 and 2.
Summary: Ridiculously short post-S2 finale fic; almost drabble-length. Olivia sees Walter(nate), and then she sees nothing at all.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the fabulous show of Fringe. No

Comments

[lunawho]

Oh, this...me like. It's ambiguous as to what is really happening, but gives enough information that we can guess the intricacies of it. It's short but it says SO much. And way to work in what Walter once told Olivia about Cortexiphan and perception. *gives kudos*

I love the open-endedness of this. And your version of Walternate. He totally underestimated Olivia. :)

[sugangel7]

And way to work in what Walter once told Olivia about Cortexiphan and perception.

I'm glad you liked that part. :) I figure that Olivia would know that the best way to defeat/outsmart Walternate was to use what Walter gave her.

Also, I'm glad you liked the ambiguity and open-endedness of it. I don't think I've ever really done that in a fic, so I'm glad it worked.

[kazzy]

Did you post this over there? I think I remember reading it. that sounds bad. Sorry.

But this wonderful - it just leaves so much to the imagination. And the ambiguous ending: whoa!

I also like the way the ending mirrors the beginning. It gives the fic a great sense of symmetry.

Lovely work.

[sugangel7]

Hah, I just posted it last night so I'd be surprised if you already saw it.

I'm glad you enjoyed the ambiguity and the symmetry. Thanks so much for the feedback.

[spaciireth]

Ooh! I like how we have very little idea of what's going on there, but can take so much from it.

[sugangel7]

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad to hear you were able to take so much from it.

[piratesmiley]

AAHH. I love this. Badass, dark, and perversely triumphant. I like your minimalism. :)

BTW - I like your layout. Is it new?

[sugangel7]

Thanks! Minimalism is SO not my thing, so I was really experimenting with it here, and I love your minimalism so that makes me really happy to hear. :)

And yes, the layout is new! I got it a few weeks ago. I really wanted a Peter/Olivia header!

Also, I feel like I see you around alot and I enjoy your writing. Mind if I add you?

[piratesmiley]

My layout is kinda crappy right now. I'm in the process of finding pics to make a new banner, so hopefully I can be P/O shippy like everyone else.

Of COURSE you can add me! I'm not particularly interesting, but feel free. :)

[sugangel7]

Cool, added you back! I am not particularly interesting either, so no worries!

[revengent]

omg I've been wanting a fic about Olivia and Walternate forever since I finshed season 2 a couple weeks ago and this was perfect, just what I wanted! I love how it's vauge and ambiguous in the way that it doesn't say exactly what's happening but you can make of it what you can.

Yeah, awesome :D

[sugangel7]

I'm glad I was able to help fulfill your need for Olivia & Walternate fic! I've been wanting to write something with them since the finale aired, but it wasn't until recently that I was inspired by that prompt.

Thanks for the feedback. So glad you enjoyed.