Powerful Desire: The Tale of Two Spirit's Souls by BlueFlameWolf COMPLETE
This was done long ago in a galaxy far, far away. It was handed to me by, I think, Bo'sun Alex back before I knew her. I recall very strongly how when I called the little shit out on her bullshit she pretty well tried to intimidate me and threaten me. Then again, the Phantom community went apeshit on me when I said Erik wasn't real. Go figure. Well, I sort of forgot about this fic. I got distracted by other, shinier, lulzier things and forgot to do much more of this. I don't have the original bits I did handy, so I'm doing it over... for however long I care to do. It isn't as though it will matter since quite honestly the woman now seems to be trying to ignore me. *shrug*
Besides, I've got something big I've been wanting to do and never could figure out how to go do it.
Powerful Desire is about Desirae, a self-professed "plain Jane" Hispanic girl (I think) and her adventures with the friendly neighborhood Phantom ghost. (I say I think she's Hispanic because I made note of that before.) In this story Desirae swears is her real life and that Erik came back from the dead to teach her how to dance and sing and use her special magic powers because she prayed to God to send her the Phantom of the Opera to teach her. Oh, and she is the reincarnation of Christine Daae. (BRILLIANT!)
Desirae has a very funky way of writing; it's backwards written in such a way that I think she was trying to sound more profound in doing it and failed miserably in the process. She also ends up sounding a LOT like Bella Swan most of the time and Erik sounds like Edward Cullen. (Meyer came from Corpus Christi, TX?) The story itself is blatantly obvious, it's stupid and for the most part just a fantasy, wish fullfillment piece made to make the author feel good about herself. Meanwhile she still has yet to tell me that she was indeed making it all up.
Desirae M______
Powerful Desire: The Tale of Two Spirit's Souls by DesiredAngelwings
Chapter One: 1 2
Chapter Two: 1 2 3
Chapter Three: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Four: 1 2 3
Chapter Five: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Six: 1 2 3 4
Chapter Seven:1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Eight: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Nine: 1 2 3 4 5 6
Chapter Ten: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Eleven: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Twelve: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Thirteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6
Chapter Fourteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Fifteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Sixteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Seventeen: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Eighteen: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Nineteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Twenty: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Twenty-One: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Twenty-Two: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
Chapter Twenty-Three: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
And now it's done. This story was monstrous. Not only were there spelling and grammar errors that were hilarious, but the plot, the logic, the very ideas behind it all were just so horrible as to be horrifying. Horrifying that someone actually thinks that this is all real and they were trying to tell people about their life. No, Miss, Erik is not in your room. He is not even a ghost. You, however, are insane. Go find the nearest insane asylum and check yourself in for psychiatric help. You need it.
Besides, I've got something big I've been wanting to do and never could figure out how to go do it.
Powerful Desire is about Desirae, a self-professed "plain Jane" Hispanic girl (I think) and her adventures with the friendly neighborhood Phantom ghost. (I say I think she's Hispanic because I made note of that before.) In this story Desirae swears is her real life and that Erik came back from the dead to teach her how to dance and sing and use her special magic powers because she prayed to God to send her the Phantom of the Opera to teach her. Oh, and she is the reincarnation of Christine Daae. (BRILLIANT!)
Desirae has a very funky way of writing; it's backwards written in such a way that I think she was trying to sound more profound in doing it and failed miserably in the process. She also ends up sounding a LOT like Bella Swan most of the time and Erik sounds like Edward Cullen. (Meyer came from Corpus Christi, TX?) The story itself is blatantly obvious, it's stupid and for the most part just a fantasy, wish fullfillment piece made to make the author feel good about herself. Meanwhile she still has yet to tell me that she was indeed making it all up.
Desirae M______
Powerful Desire: The Tale of Two Spirit's Souls by DesiredAngelwings
Chapter One: 1 2
Chapter Two: 1 2 3
Chapter Three: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Four: 1 2 3
Chapter Five: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Six: 1 2 3 4
Chapter Seven:1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Eight: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Nine: 1 2 3 4 5 6
Chapter Ten: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Eleven: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Twelve: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Thirteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6
Chapter Fourteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Fifteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Sixteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Seventeen: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Eighteen: 1 2 3 4 5
Chapter Nineteen: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Twenty: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Chapter Twenty-One: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
Chapter Twenty-Two: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
Chapter Twenty-Three: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8
And now it's done. This story was monstrous. Not only were there spelling and grammar errors that were hilarious, but the plot, the logic, the very ideas behind it all were just so horrible as to be horrifying. Horrifying that someone actually thinks that this is all real and they were trying to tell people about their life. No, Miss, Erik is not in your room. He is not even a ghost. You, however, are insane. Go find the nearest insane asylum and check yourself in for psychiatric help. You need it.