Sound and time, music and rhyme

Mar 09, 2011 01:09

| Sound and time, music and rhyme | pg | super junior | kyuhyun/donghae | 1329w |

Kyuhyun's life runs on the beat of a metronome.

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fandom:super junior, fanfiction, length:1000-5000, pairing:kyuhyun/donghae

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soundslegit March 9 2011, 08:35:08 UTC
This is good :)

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subtleslide March 10 2011, 06:16:23 UTC
thank you!

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rubyls March 9 2011, 10:38:07 UTC
oh christ.

omg this. this!!! i kind of have no words because i am just so sadface at the whole thing aslkdfasdkf i love it and the kyuhae ugh oh my god heartbreaking. the entire thing is heartbreaking i want to cry now :(((

I REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS AND I REALLY HAVE NO WORDS TO EXPRESS MY LOVE FOR THIS SO I WILL JUST LEAVE YOU MY HEART. ♥

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subtleslide March 10 2011, 06:17:13 UTC
o-ok :( i'll just stand here awkwardly holding your heart. don't cry :(

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kyudreamz39 March 9 2011, 10:53:00 UTC
;~~~; i'm spotting because i should be sleeping. i did read it though - just don't have the brain power to put into words what i'm thinking. so i'll be back~ <3

IT'S KYUHAE \O// sort of

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kyudreamz39 March 10 2011, 02:16:55 UTC
nyahah i'm back before you LOL (sorry my state of mind is still pretty questionable at the moment >.>)

i really wanted to be able to listen to kyu losing himself in their old songs, and then took that back sort of because it felt like i'd be intruding in a sacred moment~ i really like the way you wrote that part ( ... )

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subtleslide March 10 2011, 06:38:10 UTC
!! this comment made me really happy. i like to imagine that kyuhyun is stronger than he believes himself to be, and if something does happen, he'd be able to pick himself up and carry on. i'm really happy that you picked up on that :D

thank you sweetie! ♥

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mammothcock March 9 2011, 14:33:23 UTC
your descriptions are lovely, and as a player myself i have to agree on how slippery the piano keys can get, lmao. but the way you express kyu's feelings is breathtaking! this is painfully sad though :(

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subtleslide March 10 2011, 06:19:23 UTC
thank you. i used to play too, but life kind of got in the way :( i remember really hating slippery piano keys though :P

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chiyo_87 March 9 2011, 16:10:26 UTC
lovely <3

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subtleslide March 10 2011, 06:19:31 UTC
thank you :)

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