Sound and time, music and rhyme

Mar 09, 2011 01:09

| Sound and time, music and rhyme | pg | super junior | kyuhyun/donghae | 1329w |

Kyuhyun's life runs on the beat of a metronome.

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fandom:super junior, fanfiction, length:1000-5000, pairing:kyuhyun/donghae

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kyudreamz39 March 10 2011, 02:16:55 UTC
nyahah i'm back before you LOL (sorry my state of mind is still pretty questionable at the moment >.>)

i really wanted to be able to listen to kyu losing himself in their old songs, and then took that back sort of because it felt like i'd be intruding in a sacred moment~ i really like the way you wrote that part :)

*sigh* it has that tinge of bittersweetness lingering, although to be honest, it surprisingly didn't make me sad. kyu is blind, donghae is separated from him due to life's circumstances, and he's all alone really - all of this would normally make me feel pretty heartbroken. but at the same time, the way he perceives his situation is not that typical self-pitying, sulking leftover of a person, and that makes all the difference because he's willing to move on from it and continue living.

the little inserts of regret and what-could-have-been in his conversation with donghae really hit me though - i've thought so much about how unfair it is that even if you want something and really work towards it, life sticks its head in and interferes ;A;

i loved this so much ♥~

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subtleslide March 10 2011, 06:38:10 UTC
!! this comment made me really happy. i like to imagine that kyuhyun is stronger than he believes himself to be, and if something does happen, he'd be able to pick himself up and carry on. i'm really happy that you picked up on that :D

thank you sweetie! ♥

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