fic: What you eat, 3/4

[subterrain]

Yes it's true that this is all I've been doing with my time. I promise a fascinating update sometime in the distant future. It will be a bean-by-bean summary of various jelly beans I have eaten while my dog destroys my poor stuffed ferret. WOE!

Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: McCoy/Chekov ; mentions of past McCoy/Kirk
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Part III

Comments

[estei]

We both know that my self respect was but a mere memory long before we even met. So. I still love this as much as I did last night when I read it in between Venture Brothers episodes. I note that a certain piece of decorative tableware still makes an appearance. I APPROVE.

[subterrain]

Owen gave me tragic face about it. But then he also caught a tense problem in the middle of the blowjob scene (which means he read it?!) so pretty much I owe him times a billion. NO MORE GUILT TRIPS FROM ME FOR LIKE, A WEEK. D:

[estei]

OMG. Tell Owen that I just watched the episode with the speed suit and I think that his is nicer than Dean's.

[stardate64783]

just saying: I've been on the edge of my seat since you first posted this on...some...community. I can't remember which one I saw it on first...mccoyslash maybe.

Anyhow! Amazing. I am loving this so far and eagerly await for part IV

[stardate64783]

my bad: mccoy_slash

[subterrain]

Man, I crossposted like a loser for the first bits, so it was probably on every community you follow. Totally annoying! But don't hold it against me! :D

[stardate64783]

pfft, that's ok. this piece is AWESOME so x-posting everything is welcomed =D

[subterrain]

Yes, I agree with you. It came very quickly.

psfdf. :>

[madeleineurban]

I read a lot of sex scenes and god, how hot was that one? I'm squiggling in my seat. Yummy and waiting for more.

[subterrain]

Dude, you have no idea how much that buoys my soul. I am the most insecure porn writer ever. THANK YOU.

[madeleineurban]

You are very welcome. I look forward to part 4!

[dirty_smudge]

Wooo, this chapter is so goddamn sweet. I'm sort of hoping for angst next chapter, to balance it out... because I'm evil like that. And I seem to remember McCoy telling Jim in a previous chapter that he still loves him.

[subterrain]

Baha, I like the way you think. Tbh, I love me some angst, but delighter pretty much lists schmoop as a kink, and it's her birthday so I have to play by the rules. ALAS, IF ONLY I COULD END THIS BAD BOY WITH A THREESOME AND CRYING DURING SEX, I WOULD.

[dirty_smudge]

ALTERNATE ENDING! ALTERNATE ENDING!

But yeah, it's cool if you're writing a birthday fic and the recipient doesn't like angsty endings. I am just happy to feast my eyes upon this fic, however it turns out.