Comments | subterrain: fic: What you eat, 3/4

subterrain

fic: What you eat, 3/4

Sep 11, 2009 07:39

Yes it's true that this is all I've been doing with my time. I promise a fascinating update sometime in the distant future. It will be a bean-by-bean summary of various jelly beans I have eaten while my dog destroys my poor stuffed ferret. WOE!

Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: McCoy/Chekov ; mentions of past McCoy/Kirk
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Part III ( Read more... )

slash, star trek, fic

Comments 26

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subterrain September 11 2009, 23:54:59 UTC

WHAT ARE YOU DOING UP? :O NAP, BITCH!

Baha, I'm sorry. At least I keep picking gross entrees! Kidneys! Pigeon! Fish! I told you I was an asshole last week. I am going to continue to claim amnesty 'till this shit is over. :/

jimpage363 September 12 2009, 00:13:31 UTC

Oh, my. This part took my breath away. For the first time, we have a sense that McCoy could get his shit together. If he had the right encouragement. Lovely!!

subterrain November 2 2009, 04:53:02 UTC

Holy crow, I am responding stupidly late to comments on this story - but part iv is up now, if you're still interested. :>

featherjournals September 13 2009, 03:40:08 UTC

Wow. This is so lovely. The tension at the end! And then that last line...perfect. I can't wait for the next part.

And after five days of work and a long run and people being dicks all day...it's hard to comment further on the absolute loveliness of it and just how horribly blushy and guilty it made me feel to read that middle part (wow!!!) and how absolutely awesomely awkward and yet great that date scene is..and..and...yeah.

subterrain November 2 2009, 04:55:15 UTC

And look at this! I haven't even responded to your comment from part iii, either. God, I suck. Thankfully, you are like, the most tolerant person I know. :) :) :)

I'm glad you liked the date scene, for serious. I was plotting ways to make it more awkward, but it was literally making me uncomfortable. Alas!

kohlrimmedeye September 16 2009, 11:12:57 UTC

EEEEE!

Seriously, I love this story so much. It's so beautifully written that it just flows, and it's wonderfully angsty while still being delicious and it's hot as well and, you know, I'm just going to gush at you hysterically for a while. It's just... so wonderful.

I need the next part, like, five minutes ago.

xx

subterrain November 2 2009, 04:56:41 UTC

Bah, I know this reply is super late, but I did finally post part iv. Finally. I know. D:

Regardless, thank you for such an incredibly lovely comment! It made me grin.

merisunshine36 September 26 2009, 01:12:22 UTC

I have the biggest foodie boner EVER over this story. Srsly, reading stuff like this (and looking at the romantic photo essays of "sexy local ethnics" engaging in food masturbation in the latest issue of Saveur) is the reason why I have no furniture in my house but an arsenal of kitchen appliances.

way more normal and delicious than the molecular crap that the chef here is into. Thank god they didn’t order the pea soup with bacon foam.
hahahahhah....i may have made celery foam once. I was weeeeak!

I agree with everything McCoy says. Chekov is terribly cute and terribly cunning in equal measure. I want to eat dinner with you. Let me stop before I hurt myself.

*flail*

subterrain November 2 2009, 05:00:40 UTC

Oh man, I am totally replying late to these comments like a jerk, but can I just say that you made me blush? And not just because of the food masturbation!

Seriously, I am so glad this fic passed muster with a legitimate foodie because I felt like a hack writing it. Thanks so much for, idk, liking it? Not making fun of me? I feel legitimately grateful! What!

(fyi: I did eventually post the last part. It only took like, a month.)