Three Kings and an Epiphany

Dec 29, 2013 19:28

Oh look, another one-shot that is going to be at least three chapters.He should be more of an asshole ( Read more... )

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radleyboo December 30 2013, 00:45:35 UTC
no WAIT HIS HEART CANNOT DIE. SAVE HIS HEART! SAVE IT!

AHHHHHH OF COURSE HE'S GONNA PUSH HER AWAY. HE'S A FIRST-CLASS IDIOT. He's going to push her away while he goes through all his phases and OF COURSE EVERYONE'S HELPING OUT AND HE HATES IT. SAAAAAAM.

I love that it's Callaghan calling him out for being and idiot and checking up on him.

And that there are no signs of Ick. I hope he slipped out a back door and never looked back.


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subsidingchaos December 30 2013, 01:41:47 UTC
Glad Hermoine liked it.

Ick? Ick who? Never heard of him. Next!

I am working on Parts 2 and 3 - never fear dear one.

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shnallylou December 30 2013, 01:03:02 UTC
“She wanted me to make sure you were really ok. Said she could trust me to tell her how you were really doing.”

Sam was unable to hold back the snort.

GOD, it's SO TRUE, so true that Luke could speak the truth to Andy about Sam. I loved Luke in this, being how he usually is and telling Sam that he's a special kind of idiot. Luke only wants Andy to be happy and he knows Sam is that guy to be a part of her happiness.

Stubborn, asshole Sam is fun to read and pick apart. Cuz we all know inside that exterior, there's something softer and it's the real him.

I lean towards that version of Sarah too (but really I have no idea what we're gonna get when/if the writers introduce her).

Can't wait for the continuation of this :)))

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subsidingchaos December 30 2013, 01:44:52 UTC
Secret? I'm kinda loving on Luke a little now. And he and Sam are more alike than they think....

I just lurve stubborn asshole Sam. He is SUCH fun to write, but wouldn't be so awesome to deal with IRL.

glad you like...stay tuned.

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Oh, so is this the shitty stuff you claimed to be writing?? slm37 December 30 2013, 01:11:36 UTC
WOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Hills are ALIVE with the sound of music and fanfic from all the GREAT writers! A late Christmas present for us--thank you ( ... )

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Re: Oh, so is this the shitty stuff you claimed to be writing?? subsidingchaos December 30 2013, 01:55:43 UTC
Not late- there are 12 days of Christmas...

OMG, I judged snorted for reals when I pictured Peckstein vacuuming curtains. I was going to have Sam catching Holly and Gail making out but that would have turned into a different kind of fic....

Sam - the King of Repression and self-deprecating behavior. He is teachable though, right?

Did you notice the "she loves you, she does"?

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Re: Oh, so is this the shitty stuff you claimed to be writing?? slm37 December 30 2013, 02:56:18 UTC
right, right--i'm always the 1st to remind ppl there are 12 days of xmas, and there i was forgetting. sooooo, thank you for the timely Christmas present:) And YESSSSS, DUH, Bird-----I did noticed she loves you, she does. (squeal) Brill:) i'm glad you didn't have them making out--peckstein as merry maids is MUCH more entertaining.

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med14 December 30 2013, 01:11:43 UTC
Well I don't know if I love you or hate you Becca.

THIS IS GONNA BE SO GOOD.

I want the other two asap, so get on that. Ignore your husband and kids, and just lock yourself away till it's done.

I smiled so hard when I read the fruity beer/shave legs part. Couldn't laugh, sister would get curious.

Can't wait for more friend.

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subsidingchaos December 30 2013, 01:49:40 UTC
Smoochies! You looooooooove me. You know it.

Glad you liked the shaved legs line, cause seriously laughed at my own joke when I wrote that one.

Working like a busy bee on the rest.

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Grouchy Sam - pretty much a given I think dcarj December 30 2013, 02:12:03 UTC
Premise is spot on - Sam finding some kind of way to get out of the hospital early (using Christmas even if he doesn't celebrate it) and then despising every second of being taken care of. I really think that will be a true challenge for him.

Too funny that he thinks he should have been more of an asshole - you're loveable Sam, own it! (Pssst what is DB?)

And him shouldering guilt over his sister coming to see him to make sure he's okay - of course he would! No doubt about it. - 'unintentionally hurting the women he loves' - oh Sammy.

Two that brought great relief and one that he guesses he's relieved about the other...Pretty sure I know the three but still puzzling out where they all fit.

I go back and forth between thinking Sam will push her away or pull her in close and never want to let her go. I could seriously see either one actually. Looking forward to the epiphany though!

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Re: Grouchy Sam - pretty much a given I think subsidingchaos January 1 2014, 13:40:53 UTC
What Sam wants and what he really does are always so far apart, aren't they? He is so loveable, but has no idea he is, which makes us love him even more.
Guilt should be his middle name (maybe it actually is).

DB is an abbreviation for Detective Bureau.

On to the epiphany...

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