Three Kings and an Epiphany

Dec 29, 2013 19:28

Oh look, another one-shot that is going to be at least three chapters.He should be more of an asshole ( Read more... )

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Oh, so is this the shitty stuff you claimed to be writing?? slm37 December 30 2013, 01:11:36 UTC
WOOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Hills are ALIVE with the sound of music and fanfic from all the GREAT writers! A late Christmas present for us--thank you!

Alright, get the fuck on with this review, Bird. LOVED this(if you couldn't already tell by the number of exclamation points I've used thus far). You have Sam down so well. And poor Sarah Swarek--didn't have the bite to go w/ her bark--love that line. And damn you Sam and your special talent. Of course he pushed her away...AGAIN. Ugh. I want to slap him, and maybe do a few other things as well.

Love the visual of everyone at 15 as busy little elves helping out a crotchedy Sam. (Somehow the visual of Peck & Epstein cleaning his apartment, vacuuming the drapes, had me cracking up).

Love Sam's heart palpitations at the mention of Andy's name. and Luke calling him calling him out and an idiot. but not just any idiot, a special kind of idiot. so true.

As usual, you do a fantabulous job with the humor/sarcasm:)

Can't wait to see where this is going once Andy pops up. Crotchedy Sam will reach a whole new level, I'm sure

More, more, more--when are we gonna get it!?

Bravo, pal.

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Re: Oh, so is this the shitty stuff you claimed to be writing?? subsidingchaos December 30 2013, 01:55:43 UTC
Not late- there are 12 days of Christmas...

OMG, I judged snorted for reals when I pictured Peckstein vacuuming curtains. I was going to have Sam catching Holly and Gail making out but that would have turned into a different kind of fic....

Sam - the King of Repression and self-deprecating behavior. He is teachable though, right?

Did you notice the "she loves you, she does"?

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Re: Oh, so is this the shitty stuff you claimed to be writing?? slm37 December 30 2013, 02:56:18 UTC
right, right--i'm always the 1st to remind ppl there are 12 days of xmas, and there i was forgetting. sooooo, thank you for the timely Christmas present:) And YESSSSS, DUH, Bird-----I did noticed she loves you, she does. (squeal) Brill:) i'm glad you didn't have them making out--peckstein as merry maids is MUCH more entertaining.

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