COS15, Part 1 - William Moseley, Independent

[suborbital]

Title: Chronicles of Skandar
Chapter: 15 - William Moseley, Independent / Skandar Keynes, Superstar
Pairing: Will/Skandar.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The last chronicle of William.  William watches Skandar from afar.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, and they have no bearing on anyone at all.  It's FICTION.
Warnings: Slash.  Angst.

Comments

[spurnd]

ohmigod ohmigod ohmigod. het makes my heart hurt. just, uh, saying.

[suborbital]

*offers chocolates to compensate for heart hurt*

[_kirbylicious_]

*seconds spurnd and capegio* (Although, het doesn't make my heart hurt.) I want them together damnit! It's a good thing I didn't like Anna to begin with, because she ruined everything. Wench. Skandar still wants him, that's why he's being so informal. I think I may have to friend you, because you're so awesome.

[suborbital]

I like het *hides* BUT you know ... I'm not going to say anything. Because I just want to let you read the final(unless it ends up too long and then shoot me for making it so, I'm just finding it hard to cut down the last sort of chunk of this chapter). I should have made this a COW like you said. Skandar still wants him? Well, I'm going to shut up now, except to say, YES, let's be friends! Ok that sounded so gay, but you know what I mean lol. *salutes the captain*

[_kirbylicious_]

Haha it's quite all right. I just finished the paper from hell, so a comment from you is a lovely way to end my night. *bows to the most holy goddess of Will/Skandar fics*

[_kirbylicious_]

Also, I've friended you. :)

[x_devil_x]

I apologise for not giving a proper review for the last chapter, I couldn't bear to contain any words at that time because I expected a happy ending, and I was emotionally bawling, but I thought about it, and you were right, a matter of factly, it was for the best. I mean, their relationship developed into something more than Skandar's career could handle, it would've put an end to it, harshly. I was weeping whilst reading this, it was so sad, the way you portrayed William's distant memories linger and grace within him, the imprints of his memories remain, some wounds never heal. I hated the way Anna scarred William's [and Skandar's] fate, I wouldn't mind butchering her any day, but I assume this is what you meant by William being brutalized for loving Skandar in such a way, and Anna was to blame. I know Skandar opened a door to a new life and close the one he left behind, but I for one who agrees he shouldn't reopen it, it's better if they remain seperately, you've put me into a place where I liked Sarah and I am not going to change

[suborbital]

Hey there. Don't worry about the last chapter. I'd rather a short review than a flaming one lol. Actually, I don't really mind. People had strong opinions on that chapter. All I can say is have patience. The fate of, I was about to say Peter lol. No not Peter, wrong story, sorry, I'm having a slow day lol. WILLIAM, the fate of William lol, Skandar, and Sarah will be sealed in the next part. Now the next part could possibly be the last part or if it's too long I might have to break it up. But we are definitely in end game territory here. I'm glad you're sticking with Sarah. I actually like the thought of her and Skandar ending up together, but at the end of the day, this story isn't about Sarah and Skandar. It's not even about William and Skandar. It's about Skandar, so with that in mind, prepare to be a little surprised in the final instalment. This was William's last 'chronicle'. The rest is all Skandar. Thank you so much for your comment, I truly appreciate it.

[x_devil_x]

*prepares and ish excited.*

[juicybo0]

sarah??!!! omg. i feel so sorry for poor william i mean sarah? well, yeah it is kinda logical but i just really really think isnt that a bit too much for william? cuz sarah was the first to noe about them being together, she was their support and at the end she took skandar away from william.. *am crying now as i write this* :( still think you could've put more emotions on skandar's part... owells cn't wait for part too this is seriously killing me :( skandar forgot everything, how could he? william's still wearing the promise ring... awww how sweet. as much as i love this series its killllliiinnggg meeeeeeeee! really trullly your ammmaaazzziiinnngg : ) i dnt normally cry over "sad" fics. maybe sarah had good intentions but mannnnn she kinda looked liek she was shoving it up william's face :( bad sarah bad skandar :( owellls well be waiting expectantly for JAM because another drop of angst and i would probably burst lols :)

[suborbital]

Sarah didn't take Skandar away from William. William took Skandar away from William. And the reason why no emotions were shown from Skandar's point of view is because this entire chapter was written in William's POV. The next chapter switches to Skandar's and we see from his point of view what REALLY has been happening. There are some subtle little key lines that everyone has missed. I can assure you though, Sarah wasn't shoving anything in Will's face. She was trying the complete opposite. I actually like the idea of Sarah and Skandar together, in context, but you know, just wait for the next part. It's to die for. lol.

[juicybo0]

yuuups just read it and commented:) WAAHHHH what can i say? "I LOVE YOU" your great and maybe i was just blind but i sooo take back what i said about sarah shes great. and about sarah and skandar well its okaii but very realistic:)

[suborbital]

I thought it would be unrealistic for her to be Skandar's pretend girlfriend for 3-4 yers without anything happening. And you know me, I prefer a bit of realism. So that's why I made it like they were together for a little while before they realized they were just together out of convenience and then just made it look like they were together to everyone else after that. I'm glad you commented on the other part though. Thank you :)

[anonymous]

ohhh please don't let him marry sarah. please. that would really bite.

(love the story though! extremely sad.)

[suborbital]

Sad indeed, but I'm glad you like it. Thank you for commenting