First time playing Yui so let me know how I'm doing! Anything I need to improve on?

Anon is on, screening on and IP is off /o/

[Character Name] Yui
[Canon] Angel Beats!
[Point Taken from Canon] End of episode 10, after she passes on

[Age] 16 or 17
[Gender] Female
[Sexual Orientation] Hetro

( Reach for the sky! )

Warnings: Spoilers about Yui
Dream Effects: (Optional) Happiness, joy, excitement. Soon to be followed by shock and intense pain all over.

( Things taken for granted... )