White Noise - Part 5

Apr 15, 2011 02:54

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shana31 April 16 2011, 03:43:43 UTC
oh my.... wahahahahaha.
Nope. I don't hate the 'sucking off' part. Though I would if they ended up on bed together. And especially LOVE the ending where Minho wonders Onew's reaction to it. xD
Minho, just go get your Onew already dammit!

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strongbabypanda April 16 2011, 04:58:32 UTC
XD Soon~ soon

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yuki12341234 April 16 2011, 08:25:13 UTC
you update fast!! *happy* anyways, this fic has me sitting on edge, I can't wait to see onew's reaction...key's(jonghyun too?) reaction! XD but i hope he wont be sad that minho is sexing it up while he's getting stabbed ;O;

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strongbabypanda April 16 2011, 18:31:50 UTC
Ahhh, I love this comment. XD I do update fast, yes? Thank youuuu~

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ex_argh April 17 2011, 08:20:38 UTC
OMG I love how Key tortured Onew with the human D: dhfdjkgkd that was well written and generally awesome *nods*

And omg Jessica taking Minho's mind off Onew :O XDDD

♥ hope your fingers are ok :D

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strongbabypanda April 20 2011, 08:14:34 UTC
EEE I missed this comment before. XD It just made me squee. THANK YOU~!

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ex_argh April 20 2011, 08:33:52 UTC
its ok^^; I'm a comment spammer (:

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navia April 20 2011, 06:40:31 UTC
I can't imagine Jessica getting on her knees for anyone, let alone a pitiful human. It would have been great if she'd made Minho go down on her, because isn't it his job as a human to serve her (from her POV)? That definitely would have taken his mind off things, plus he could have learned a thing or two. (Not to mention it would have been incredibly hot, omg.)

I don't have time to read the rest right now, but I hope nothing happens to Jessica. I also hope she develops some sympathy for Minho or Onew, at least enough so that she doesn't try to kill them both after Key and Jonghyun are taken care of. I really want her to survive and go on to live her vampire life, because Krystal being killed was harsh enough. I know this isn't Jessica's story, but I hope she gets to kill or at least maim Jonghyun herself. She deserves the revenge.

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strongbabypanda April 20 2011, 07:57:16 UTC
*_* omg amazing comment for the wiinnn. Thank you so much.

Making Minho go down on her would have possibly upset Minho further, which was kind of opposite of the point. If she did something that he found more stressful (and the blowjob was oddly stressful enough) then he would have just been like "groan how has Onew gotten me into this whhiiine") but I agree it would have been amazingly hot.

Vampires in this universe are meant to be extremely sexual creatures, and none of them would see going down on someone as any kind of degrading thing (even if it was a human). She wasn't servicing him, she was servicing her own purpose. (And she enjoys giving blowjobs, anyway. She likes control and power, and for some women, blowjobs do that. But that's basically a preference personal thing.)

Hmm, I hope Jessica gets a good ending myself, because she's one of my favorite characters to write. ♥

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