FIC: Like Normal (Onew/Jay)

[strongbabypanda]

Title: Like Normal
Topic: Onew and Jay's sex life
Warnings: fail smut ;_; Top!Onew
Summary: .. The topic pretty much says enough.

Notes: ;_; IDK why I can't write smut.. I even had some wine, but I was too embarassed to make it as graphic as I'd have liked. Ho hum.

... For lefty_215! XD; Sorry I took soooo long. idek. XD Let's hope the next one is

Comments

[lefty_215]

This gets better each time I read it. Not that it wasn't good to start with. LOLOL I don't mean that at all. And yes, I have read it multiple times...

IDK, it's like little things that popping out at me or something. NOT MAKING SENSE HERE. And I also like how your smut has some plot. Not just like, BAM BOOM MIND BLOWINGLY GOOD SEX DONE. Seriously, the awkward is forever beautiful and more real.

Whimper has to like, be my guuuhhh word. That word kills me in many different contexts.. LOLOLOL wuuuuut?

"It hurts." I say, strained, and when I say it - I'm surprised to see this gleam of excitement in his eyes.

HEEEELLOOO. guuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... You're trying to kill me, right?

Also also, I love how Jay just want to get out of there ASAP.

LOVE THE ENDING. HATERS TO THE LEFT FOREVER.

Still sad for the vase... ;~;

And if this is what I get for my first smut then I can't wait until next time!! Whenever and whatever that might me~ XDDD

If we're pretending Jay and Jungmo live together, then LAWL at Jungmo getting kicked out all

[lefty_215]

ALSO

"You'll leave a mark." I mutter. He lifts his head and breathes, "Let me..."

GUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.........

Oh... Hi, I'm back~~ XDDD;;;;;

[lefty_215]

ALSO ALSO

becoming exhausted in my attempts to relax.

THIS. THIS.

[lefty_215]

Jinki's mouth pressing so hard against mine that it's near painful. This isn't anything new either. Jinki is always rough, expressing his 'need' by seemingly forgetting that when you use every ounce of your strength on someone, it hurts.

Love this so much. Guuuuurl....

Normally, he's rough.

All this roughness needs to be ficage...guuuuhhhh...

[lefty_215]

Ohai... I'm just gonna leave a new comment here~~

"Jay.." Whenever he says my name like this, in that deep masculine voice - with no 'sunbae' or 'hyung' - I feel reassured.

LOVE THIS. Specially the mention of dropping 'sunbae' or 'hyung'. Besides...it's kinda hot. IDEK... WUUUT. dsjklsdfjkfs Onew can be all, Jay-ah~~...yeah I know no Korean..kthaxbai.

I'm sorry all these comments on here are only mine... XDDD;;;;;;;

[strongbabypanda]

LOLZ somehow it wouldn't be as hot if Onew was like "Yongdok" or whatever imo. XD XD I'M SORRY. His real name just makes me think of him with a duck bill...

whut /random

ilu gurl

[lefty_215]

There a 'Donald Duck' in your family?

BTW, I love Donald Duck. Made that even funnier to me...idek. lololol

[jongkeyfan408]

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This was amazing XDDD AHFIAPF i was just starting to love jay/jino and YOU write this!??! oh god. i'm falling for another couple now XDD aw. i like how jay's bottom so jinki can be put to good use hehe.

There's nothing perfect about my body, and seeing him crawl over top of it makes this feel all the more wrong.
-COMEON JAY! EVEN MY MOM LOVES YOU WTF.

"I don't want it.." he growls.
-DIES. OMG TOP!jinki is the best ever XD

Onew wakes up to find Jay trying to escape as quietly as possible.
-i find ninja!jay kinda cute ^^

this smut is awesome, and lmao drinking wine before writing this :)))) AHDSJLFIJHEF. people must've been too awed to even comment!!!
loved this :) and yay! i'm the second 6th commenter :))

[strongbabypanda]

Sorry like. omg. XD You liking TOPOnew and approving of BOTTOMJay and uhhh. I love you? *KINDA SHOCKED*

♥ this comment, imma worship it.

[strongbabypanda]

WAIT, SORRY, YOUR MOM LIKES JAY? Your mom outcools my mom whuuttt.

[jongkeyfan408]

LMAO SM the ballad came up on inkigayo and then she just pointed to Jay and said
'ohmy i like him the best! he's handsome!" and then she seems to be always around when i watch sm the ballads lives, lol :)
AND YES. TOPonew is frikin hot and jay bottoming is great just like how i like jonghyun to be topped

[gooberso1]

Saving myself a spot so that I can leave you an amazing comment after I re-read this amazing thing again Psh.... Its definantly not fail smut! D:

[strongbabypanda]

This comment is amazing on it's own ohlord.

[gooberso1]

Okay! I was finally able to sit down and read it! <3333

First off... that was really hot! And awkward!
I don't know who seems more awkward in their relationship together...
It's a good type of awkward though...

"Jinki. Lube." I softly remind him.

"I don't want it.." he growls.

"I need it." I respond.

He sits up, and crams two of his fingers into my mouth. "Lick them. Use your spit. This is all your getting, Jay." He sighs, sounding less demanding and more pathetic when he adds. ".. I can't wait.."

BEST PART EVER..... Just so you know.....
Poor Jay, he needs lube with the dubudge coming his way.
Thank for posting! I love your Jaynew stories! XD

[volatileflame]

the open end kinda kills me, but i love it

[strongbabypanda]

"... love you so much Onew you sexy mother fucker come lick me."

the end.

XD; Sorry. I thought the open end would be a bother, but I couldn't help myself.

[volatileflame]

lol~ that works XD