This is my spot. I am holding it for when I have time to go BACK THROUGH ALL THE FUCKING PAGES and copy and paste shit to HERE because SOMEONE is too LAZY to check MORE THAN ONE PAGE OF COMMENTS.
First of all, I love that you put this story in an unexpected setting. Louisiana seems like such a surprising choice - it's always LA or some unspecified city in Texas or whatever - and at first I was like okay Lindsay, random. Once I got into the story though, you made it feel like there was nowhere else it could've happened, like New Orleans was a character in the story as much as Jensen and Jared were. (Not as much as Brock Kelly; nothing is as relevant as Brock Kelly.) I've never been to Louisiana, or really to the south at all, other than to your house and some grody mall in Orlando, but you really made the city breathe. I loved that
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I'm only going to get 4 hours of sleep before work because I stayed up reading this whole thing... It was SO worth it! Hot and completely awesome! I loved Leighton!
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I'm a bit too tired and smooshy to write anything coherent, but it was muy bueno.
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First of all, I love that you put this story in an unexpected setting. Louisiana seems like such a surprising choice - it's always LA or some unspecified city in Texas or whatever - and at first I was like okay Lindsay, random. Once I got into the story though, you made it feel like there was nowhere else it could've happened, like New Orleans was a character in the story as much as Jensen and Jared were. (Not as much as Brock Kelly; nothing is as relevant as Brock Kelly.) I've never been to Louisiana, or really to the south at all, other than to your house and some grody mall in Orlando, but you really made the city breathe. I loved that ( ... )
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YOU KNOW YOUR OPINION IS THE ONLY ONE THAT EVER MATTERS.
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Thank you!!
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