Week 1 - You Gave Everything You Possibly Could

[streetnights]

They say that with hindsight, you should be able to see the stress lines, the miniature fractures, the spiderweb of cracks

Comments

[fourzoas]

Thanks for partnering with me! I had a great time, and I quite love your piece this week!

[streetnights]

It was an honor!

[_rabidwombat_]

Numbly, blindly, I find her palm and I press my lips to it, one second, two, pressing my life, my love into her skin.

I left it there.

And then I'm gone, gone from the pieces of my life and future scattered over that table, that couch, that bed.

Gone from that world.

It is sad, but I like it.

[streetnights]

Thank you!

[medleymisty]

Very nice metaphors here, I think. :)

[streetnights]

Thanks!

[myrna_bird]

Hopefully he will find the right woman for him, someday. Very good intersection pieces!

[streetnights]

Someday. But it's certainly not her!

[notodette]

The first line really had me, and I loved the whole thing. The shell-shock is made so clear.

[streetnights]

Thank you :)