Week 1 - You Gave Everything You Possibly Could

[streetnights]

They say that with hindsight, you should be able to see the stress lines, the miniature fractures, the spiderweb of cracks

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

Beautifully written, and I can see why the ending was such a jolt-- it seemingly came from nowhere, and was so much crueller than it needed to be.

Lovely phrasing in the ending.

[streetnights]

Thank you, very much!

[whipchick]

Really enjoyed the way your pieces complemented each other, and especially the use of the fractured/jagged/edged details.

[streetnights]

Thanks! fourzoas is amazing, and it was an honor to work with her.

[n3m3sis43]

I felt so bad for this poor guy, and I loved the common details between your piece and your partner's. Really nicely done. :)

[streetnights]

I like close intersections :)

[roina_arwen]

I like seeing both sides of this scene. Well done!

[streetnights]

Thanks!

[cheshire23]

I love the contrast between "her" calm and the narrator's...not.

[streetnights]

She is, after all, chillin' :)