fic: Catalyst :: chapter seven

[stormsandsins]

She’d hate him. She surely would. Call him a monster, all kinds of names, and she’d try to run. As far as possible. Futilely. It downright killed him that he'd have to contain her.

Comments

[abetterreality]

I just went through and like marathon read the rest of these chapters in order to catch up. I apologize for not reviewing the others :/ . But yay Korea! Was this something you had planned for a long time? I hope you keep us updated on how things are going when you get over there and I wish you all the best of luck. :) I love your characterization of Bom and how she's dealing with all this, how all the girls are dealing with all this. Chaerin's outburst especially was well written, I can imagine her doing just that (even though she seems to be the most calm and collected of the girls). YG is such an ass in your fic, and I know from what 21tv and the bb documentaries that i've watched that when it comes to business he's all strict and stuff but oooooooo really not liking him here. But that's okay I respect his characterization. The way you describe how TOP feels whenever Bom feeds on him is descriptive heaven, lend me your talent with words please. I was wondering who turned Minzy, I was thinking you might have eluded to it being

[stormsandsins]

No problem; I like reading comments but I'm not about to withhold chapters just because I haven't reached a certain number of comments -- people who do that are absurd and petty and should not write.

Ahem. Sorry. About Korea... well, the application process is actually quite long so if you're thinking about it you have to start getting proactive quickly. I'd been thinking about it since early 2011 but applied in May, and missed the Fall deadline due to my reference letters coming in too late. Lots of setbacks!

I'll try to update on my life in Korea ^^ Someone on asianfanfics said I could finally start stalking TOP and Bom but the truth is... I'll actually be on the other side of the country haha.

You know what's funny? I never wanted YG to come off as an ass. I wanted him to be a father figure: strict but fair. I mean it wasn't like he was going to fire TOP for mouthing him off at the beginning, but the truth is, in Asia respect for elders is taken very seriously, so I took that into consideration. In chapter four YG gives TOP a

[abetterreality]

This is going to sound stupid but when you wrote that you are going to be on the other side of the country I was like "there's another side?" lol. (face meet palm). It's not that I think Seoul is the only city in South Korea but it is such a small country that...i don't even know let me just not finish this thought

[stormsandsins]

Haha I'll be in Ulsan! Next to Busan, if you know where that is.

Gurl I only know a bit of Korean lol dear God I would fail so hard teaching something in Korean. I can read hangul but I don't know what I'm reading most of the time haha. So yes, I will be teaching English :)

Ah well I didn't mean to make him sound that heartless :S But oh it's fine, I don't mind concrit, seriously! Gimme more XD

Of course you can also veer off into crap land without a plot outline, but like you said, yes, it is more freeing and more surprising for the writer :]

<3

[xs_amletx]

Wow I am loving this fic so so so much. It really is such an interesting idea. I wish I could come up with something this creative. It's a great talent!

I am so curious about TOP's past and who turned him, and I am constantly wishing for more development with Bommy.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Any plans to update soon (not that I'm nagging or anything, just curious).

Re: &lt;3

[stormsandsins]

Waaaah thank you for the love :)

I've just moved to Korea for a year so it might take a little while for me to settle down comfortably. I just got lost trying to find my way home last night and I'm still wildly uncertain about my footing here, but I'll pull through! And yes I do plan on updating sometime soon. I scanned whatever I hadn't yet typed so let's just hope I don't fry my hard drive (knock on wood).

[backporchpoet]

I just read all seven chapters and this is such a great story! I can't wait to see where it ends up! You do such a wonderful job with Tabi and Bom's voices!

[stormsandsins]

Oh damn I forgot to cross-post chapter eight here. Err, you can always check it out here :) Cheers!

[backporchpoet]

Oh, my goodness! I'm going to read it straight away!