FIC: Leaving Marks :: Chapter Two :: A Study into Psychological Bias

[stormsandsins]

Author's note: You'll find I took the liberty of exploring and developing the academic side of Sky High a little bit more here. Enjoy :)

Touch of fire, touch of ice. A wary convergence to a steadier rapprochement through the years.

Comments

[cyprith]

I am very glad you posted this. ^.^ I needed a pick-me-up and no one else was updating.

[stormsandsins]

I come from the Harry Potter fandom. New stuff every millisecond. This? This is very quiet. I like it and yet I wish more people posted. Love to know what everyone else comes up with :)

[grayglube]

I had clicked this thinking it was going to be a short chapter and then I scrolled down and saw how long it was. It went by fast when I read it though and didn't drag so it was obviously a fantastic chapter.

Perry is great, I'm loving him loads. He's a lovely potrayl of a cheeky boy.

And then Paul being dead on his feet from just studying and babysitting and life in general is such an echo of a highschooler who just pulled an all-nighter.

The powers you gave people are great because they're so diverse and different, from snakes to glue to invisibility. I liked the glue best though.

Great chapter and I like the transition Claire and Warren are making, it's back and forth between tolerance and aggravation. It's like a tightrope of tension.

[stormsandsins]

He's a lovely potrayl of a cheeky boy.

I used to banter back and forth all the time with one of my guy friends in high school. This was strangely reminiscent of our conversations where we'd invariably talk about sex at one point or another and he'd flat-out deny it. Silly boys.

And then Paul being dead on his feet from just studying and babysitting and life in general is such an echo of a highschooler who just pulled an all-nighter.

I don't think I ever pulled all-nighters before my second year of college, and especially now in university. But I did last night while writing that bit, so yeah, experience renders realism.

The powers you gave people are great because they're so diverse and different, from snakes to glue to invisibility. I liked the glue best though.*snort* I have a whole table of possible powers I can give characters, all sorted according to their Focus groups *facepalm* I'm insane. There, I said it. I don't think I have a favourite power, though. I guess the glue's pretty cool, but the chameleon dude (Sam, Warren's

[grayglube]

Oh yes the animosity must have time to flourish into something akin to a robust feast of sexual tension, yadda yadda yadda.

Wouldn't make much sense if they humped like bunnies the first time they enter the caf and saw each other or jumped on each other during save the citizen and became a tangled mush of sweaty limbs and so forth.

Gotta have an abundance of plot. Which you do.

[stormsandsins]

Now that'd be a great idea if I ever wanted to write a snarky Warren/Mary Sue parody. Eyes lock while playing Save the Citizen. Opposing team member pushes him to her, they start humping like wild beasts.

Icy cum falls out of her. Now that's just deranged. haha :D

Woot, I have plot!

[delylah]

I like this...now I'm going to have to go watch Sky High again to refresh my memory...

[stormsandsins]

I've been watching it very often lately. Next few chapters will be tough since they'll be tied in with the movie "era" *sigh*

That's actually why I never did a plotty Hogwarts era.